Demons (City of Lies)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

Another nightmare...


Submitted: December 07, 2008

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Trainman238

This is more of a poem than a short story.
I really really like it though.
It's great.
It's just....really short...

Sun, December 7th, 2008 2:36pm

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Well yeah, its short but I think I pointed at what I wanted to point.

I didn't imagine it this way, but I had been struck be inspiration and it made it better than I imagined...

Thanks for the comment.

Sun, December 7th, 2008 6:39am

Alek92

Well yeah, its short but I think I pointed at what I wanted to point.

I didn't imagine it this way, but I had been struck be inspiration and it made it better than I imagined...

Thanks for the comment.

Sun, December 7th, 2008 2:38pm

Alek92

Damn. Too much coffee, too much school...

Sun, December 7th, 2008 2:44pm

Midnight Dreamer

Alek

Once again you capture and show all of us exacly what you r wanting to say

I love it


Like always


-MD-

Mon, December 8th, 2008 1:19am

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Thanks.

Tue, December 9th, 2008 2:28am

alex wolff

finally got around to this, and im glad i did.
awesome work here man, its so discriptive and imaginitive, great job.

Sun, December 14th, 2008 5:06am

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Thanks for the comment and the time. Glad you like it.

Sun, December 14th, 2008 2:32am

Dark Skylight

This is really great written,although the context is sad and painful.Its deep and so real.City of lies.You picked the right title..

Sat, January 24th, 2009 1:58pm

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Thanks for the comment.

I'm working on the 3rd part, another short story. The next one should be even more painful, if I manage to make it that way...

Sat, January 24th, 2009 7:27am

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