The Cuddle

Poem by: Alek92

Reads: 5860 | Likes: 1 | Shelves: 0 | Comments: 17

Not really a poem when it comes to the rhyme but still.... I just felt the urge to write something like this and tell the people about it.

You know, when we cuddle,

And your head is on my chest…

We work against gravity

And I feel like I am flying

Far above the land of sorrow and excitement.

***

Only then, my heart beats slow,

My blood stops rushing,

And I feel so special.

The true moment of calmness

Comes only when I am close to you,

Only when I can hear you breathing

And your heart pounding.

***

You have the power to make me the strongest,

And the privilege to hold me down.

Your shoulder, which was always there for me,

Is the most comfortable cushion for my head to rest.

***

All the words you say, about me, about us,

Are the greatest cure for my mind.

And when you kiss me, tenderly and honestly,

I lose my mind and memory.

***

The each moment I spend with you

Is worth more than e'ternity.

Submitted: August 23, 2008

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vampireHunter329

oh.. sweet! aww..

Sat, August 23rd, 2008 2:57pm

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awww... thanks.

Sat, August 23rd, 2008 8:04am

Chicka19

Alek this is so sweet. You did an amazing job. =)
~Mandy

Sat, August 23rd, 2008 2:59pm

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Thanks Mandy. Glad you like it. xD

Sat, August 23rd, 2008 8:04am

Maple Bowen

Sweet.... I really love it. Sweet and romantic, but isn't the boy supposed to be the cusion??? That's what I always thought. Jk, LOL. =)
~Maple

Sat, August 23rd, 2008 4:06pm

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Well, I wrote about her shoulder, not mine...

Sat, August 23rd, 2008 9:53am

Dark Skylight

Awww this is soooooooooo sweet and touchy.Sooo beautiful.
:)

Sat, August 23rd, 2008 7:21pm

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Awww, thanks for the comment.

Sat, August 23rd, 2008 12:32pm

nuttyz

This is such a lovely poem!!XD
So sweet and romantic.

Great job Alek!^_^

Sun, August 24th, 2008 2:04pm

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Thanks.

Sun, August 24th, 2008 8:17am

SandMan

Very sweet. Again, I must divulge the not-so-secret secret about myself; I really enjoy love poems. This was an excellent piece, and describes a wonderful affection. Well done Alek, I liked this one alot.

Tue, August 26th, 2008 3:37am

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Same not-so-secret secret here. Thanks for the comment, glad you liked it.

Tue, August 26th, 2008 12:19am

Haylieee Hamiltonnn

so sweet. cuddling is the best. honesntly i would choose it over making-out any day. i just love it and i love your poem :]

Wed, August 27th, 2008 1:35am

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Same here. Cuddle rulez.

Wed, August 27th, 2008 3:01am

Laurel

I loved it =] I agree that cuddling is great. I find a guy's chest better than any pillow there could be. Awesome poem :)

Fri, August 29th, 2008 11:18pm

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Hey, thanks for the comment.

Sat, August 30th, 2008 3:48am

S.C. Kross

Awww...That's really sweet. haha, one of your very best! It doesn't matter if a poem rymes, this still has a lot of great poetic quialities. Great job. :)

Mon, September 1st, 2008 7:23pm

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Thanks, glad you liked it.

Tue, September 2nd, 2008 11:47am

JenniferNichole

Absolutely adorable poem. I love the way you express familiar 'couples moments', in such a clear and simple way. I especially like the third stanza;

'You have the power to make me the strongest,'
'And the privilege to hold me down.'

~and so on~

I liked it alot;)

~rain

Thu, September 4th, 2008 8:24pm

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Glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment. See ya around.

Fri, September 5th, 2008 5:49am

Pratibha

The each moment I spend with you

Is worth more than e'ternity.

HOW to choose my fav lines...each and every line went right inside my soul and u know what the truth of ur love is SHINING....GOD BLESS BOTH OF YOU...

Sat, September 6th, 2008 9:25pm

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lol... I wish there were "we"... Thanks for the comment.

Sun, September 7th, 2008 1:12am

gerabel

Very nice sentiments and well written, Alek!. Since love makes the world go round, we should all enjoy love poems. I agree with Anna Therese's comments but overall, a lovely and delightful poem. Well done!!!

Peace.....Jerry

Wed, September 17th, 2008 11:56am

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Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you liked it.

Wed, September 17th, 2008 8:15am

Nonna2

I really enjoyed this Alec and it takes my breath away to think that you are so young and writing in a second language. Not matter what happens, keep writing as you have so much to say and you always say it so honestly yet so beautifully.

Susan

Fri, September 19th, 2008 12:46am

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Thanks for the comment and appreciation. Yeah, honesty is the most important thing in my life.

Fri, September 19th, 2008 5:30am