The Huntington Incident.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Science Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

sorry for a awful format, i had to put it into image format in order to post, booksie was being very troublesome.

 

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Submitted: October 27, 2008

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WyrmScourge

nice tie in with your Iron Crow story, the beginning of it all, very cool i likey.

Mon, October 27th, 2008 8:43pm

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thanks, i managed to get booksie to post it when i held the site at gunpoint. glad you liked it!

Mon, October 27th, 2008 3:56pm

WyrmScourge

gunpoint, lmao, ok then...

Mon, October 27th, 2008 11:54pm

WyrmScourge

I wrote a new poem for Queen's pack challenge, i call it "Halloween night, time for the beast i am inside.." hope u like it

Sat, November 1st, 2008 6:59am

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cool, ill chakc it out.

Sat, November 1st, 2008 6:24am

WyrmScourge

Four more lost, three are remaining, i suggested a vote, all alpha females that care to run, submit their names and a vote be taken, i am waitng for the rest to respond first.

As for those who submitted stories for the challenge, i think possibly a position as a Council member if they so wish to have it, though you and I are still the First and Second Male council members.

Prehaps when this issue is settled we issue somekind of other challenge. I have not heard from Artemis, who is a friend of Sirena and Queen, but i sure as Hell would like to know what is going on with those three.

Mon, November 3rd, 2008 10:43pm

WyrmScourge

Well i thought as much, and yes for the most part ppl are, Sirena is throwing a damn tantrum, and not a word for Sirena, as far as i know most are staying in the Clan. I will be putting up an article for the Election of an Alpha Female with rules as to how it will be run.

If you could get the word out, i have spoken to a few of the members already, Alvenra, Dice of Chance, Solenbum and Itswarui, or however that one is spelled.

Thanks for the help Alex, hopefully this will all be sorted out soon.

Mon, November 3rd, 2008 11:37pm

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you just do what you think is best cheif.

Mon, November 3rd, 2008 3:39pm

WyrmScourge

If she cant act responisble, and be an effective leader who wants to joke arround and has a sister that has tantrums about what is going on, at the drop of a hat, then so be it, we, as our forefathers did, declare our independence of ineffectual leaders.

People need effective leadership, not childish nonsense. And that is all that Queen and Sirena are giving.

We need benevolent order, not chaos.. And I and urself, Beauty and anyone else who takes the offer of being on the Alpha council, can do that.

But i need your support in the matter Alex, please..

Tue, November 4th, 2008 12:19am

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i still have no clue as to what has her panties in a bunch, but as long as you can maintain yourself as an effective, fair and rational leader, witch im sure you can, then you have my total support. there will be troubles ahead, but if we just stick together, im sure we can hold out.

Mon, November 3rd, 2008 4:22pm

WyrmScourge

hmmm, ok thanx for the support, i dont know though, how can u base who can be alpha female on how they can manage things on here, in real life is one thing, but on here, thats a lot harder. The way i figure it is if people see someone's work, they have understanding of that person in way that is easy to see.

I dont know if that makes any sense? Does it, I am just as much in the dark as you are buddy, besides if we do an election on which people can vote, we show we are fair to the Members of the Clan, that we all have a say.

I dont know, its upto you.. I just dont want to cause too much chaos, you know, i am trying to find an effective awnser to our problem.

Tue, November 4th, 2008 12:30am

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well, as long as its fair and democratic, thats all i care about, just do what your instincts tell you, i cant really think of much at the time, the real world is just as addled as the cyberspace now, just do what you think is best.

Mon, November 3rd, 2008 4:32pm

WyrmScourge

I'll say this much, thank God and the Goddess for all the Poli Sci and Sociology classes i took, and Civics class, it finally came in handy, lol

Tue, November 4th, 2008 12:32am

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your telling me.

Mon, November 3rd, 2008 4:33pm

WyrmScourge

yeah, this is what happens when you get little kids in charge of something, that dont know anything about the real world, i mean come on a 15 and a 13 year old, the only one thats been mature about any of it is Artemis, i hope she stays, at the very least as a member of the council, btw Alverna is now on the council.

It was only fair as she did submit a piece for the challenge.

Tue, November 4th, 2008 12:54am

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well dragonlady says that she has given sirena charge of the pack, but things are on the brink of chaos now, i guess we will just have to ride out the storm and see where we land.

Mon, November 3rd, 2008 4:59pm

WyrmScourge

well thats why we are forming a Clan, Clan Dreamweaver, we need to free ourselves of this pack business, and btw the pack she is giving is going to be profemale, no alpha males, sounds a bit sexist if you ask me?

Tue, November 4th, 2008 1:12am

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man i dont know, this is all just so chaotic, i suppose one could call it sexist, but for now i think we should focas on consolidating our position and keeping our members from getting the wrong ideas.

Mon, November 3rd, 2008 5:26pm

WyrmScourge

yup, which is what i have been doing, and so far, i have had nothing but support from a number of ppl, even Artmeis agrees with me. They maybe powerkegs, but i am a huge fricken Dragon when it comes to this, i take nothing from no little brats, they dont scare me.

We will focus on conslidating the Clan, and making sure that people stay, which is what i have been doing for hours now, so i am going to eat dinner.

And making sure that our clan members dont have the right idea, people well see how irrational those two are, already ppl are aggreeing with what we are doing, and are accepting, as i am being rational in all of this with the others.

And that my friend is the key, rational thinking, something those two are incapable of, as they are clearly irrational. I will play their little game and they will lose, hell they already are.

They messed with the wrong Dragon, lol, i eat powderkegs for breakfest. So dont worry, ok Alex, we will see this through, Unity in Strength. Ok friend?

Tue, November 4th, 2008 1:53am

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okay, im just stressed enough in the real world without all this crap flying around, oh well, see you around man.

Mon, November 3rd, 2008 7:58pm

WyrmScourge

errh.. Strength in Unity, geesh i am so damn rattled and stressed out by all this crap, but we will presevere and prevail.

Tue, November 4th, 2008 1:55am

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tell me about it, things are crazy now.

Mon, November 3rd, 2008 7:57pm

WyrmScourge

yeah well i just added Artemis to the council, so that will help alot, she has been a real pillar in all this mess.

Tue, November 4th, 2008 4:15am

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smart move

Mon, November 3rd, 2008 9:21pm

WyrmScourge

Artemis had to leave, her mom didnt like the idea of the clan, i dont know, anyways we have a new member Alyxx, joined last night.

Tue, November 4th, 2008 10:29pm

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sweet, sorry to hear atrimis left, but at least we still have a strong membership.

Tue, November 4th, 2008 2:47pm

Elzeranova

This is an awesome tie in to Iron Crow, right at the beginning eh? sound's like the government is trying to cover it up, spooky! Again this was awesome XD I loved it.

Thu, November 6th, 2008 9:39am

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the government is always covering things up, lol, glad you liked it.

Thu, November 6th, 2008 7:16am

WyrmScourge

Hey buddy where u been? Haven't heard from you lately, everything ok?

Thu, November 6th, 2008 6:45pm

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sorry, ive been really stressed and busy.

Thu, November 6th, 2008 1:17pm

Pandaface

that was a-w-e-s-o-m-e

Sun, January 11th, 2009 3:48pm

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thank you very much!

Sun, January 11th, 2009 4:39pm

PillarsOfSand

This is really good. I like how you managed to effectively change from epistolary form to drama. It's a very unique idea and it works well here.

Sun, March 22nd, 2009 11:49pm

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thanks lot! i really appriciate it.

Sun, March 22nd, 2009 5:49pm

Vicci

Y'know, the image-format actually adds to the content of the story. I love the transitions done in each entry, and they really do make the whole thing seem like an actual situation had occurred. Absolutely wonderful, chilling suspense is built into this as well! And the mystery of this Kemmler really makes a reader wonder! Me like, me like very much. XD *clicks on the Like It button*

Wed, March 24th, 2010 12:35am

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lol thank you very much vicci

Wed, March 24th, 2010 3:34pm

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