I am Rapunzel

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic

someone please set me free....

I am Rapunzel,

locked away in my tower,

within me, I can feel the power,

the power to escape,

when will my life change shape?

I dream, of the world outside,

for years and years I've cried,

cried for help, cried for love,

as I wonder if anyone hears me from above,

why won't they let me leave?

if they did, what greatness could I acheive?

I need a way out of this hell,

but I am under the evil one's spell,

can anyone hear my screams?

or am I forever stuck in my daydreams?

oh someone, anyone, please hear me!

someone set me free!

I am Rapunzel....


Submitted: April 01, 2012

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deaths daughter

i understand what you mean and i love the concept of it

Fri, May 11th, 2012 2:02pm


thanks :P

Fri, May 11th, 2012 1:41pm


Personally, I like the connection of the first and last line. The change of punctuation tipped it nicely. But I feel its kinda random. Yes, I like the concept though O.o Pretty sad :(

Thu, August 2nd, 2012 7:26am


thanks! :)

Sat, September 8th, 2012 7:09pm

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