who's to say?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Literary Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

Short story about love, being warned by someone of the way they are.

I knew it. I knew right from the start. I didn’t have to guess, you were the one who told me. “I’m no good, don’t trust in me”. I heard what you said, but I didn’t really listen. Words came and left with the summer breeze. And I was left standing in between who you were and who I thought you’d be. I can’t figure you out, you seem sweet, but you also seem like an ass. I carry you around in my heart, while you keep me underground. Who’s to say where we’ll stay? Maybe tomorrow we’ll change. Having hope is not enough; having faith will not build a relationship of scraps and pieces of hate and love.


Submitted: August 03, 2010

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imagination101

I REALLY LIKED THE WAY THIS FLOWED!

Wed, September 22nd, 2010 2:59pm

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