Little Girl Crying Heart

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

the crying heart

She is the little girl

Whom he has courted when she is barely 16 years old

She knew nothing, not about feeling or love

She is just a naive little girl

Whom always prefer playing with dolls

Rather than being in love


And he, he did come in to her life

And woo her hard, make her fallen in love with him

Him, whom gave promises, about life together

He promise to always makes her smiles

Always be there with her during her ups and downs

Forever love her in his heart


Then, a year later,  the family comes into pictures

They disengaged the relationship, they broke the ties

And still, him promise to seek for her after 10 years

He promise to be a better person with a bright future

And come to her and claiming her hand


And yet, when she is 27 years old....

She is still waiting for her knight in white horse

With shining armors to rescue her from the sadness

Turning down others because of the promises they made

And there, he already be a married man


How sad, life is...

How cruel empty words is

How hard did she cried...

Feeling like a moron she is...

Then she decided to move on..

And learnt from the past..

Start life a new...

Forgetting the past..

Though the shadow keep lingering


Submitted: March 18, 2013

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ole segale

Liked the picture you put in my head it seem like you lived it for real and it also has a really great anticlimax

Mon, March 18th, 2013 4:47pm


Thanks ole,

After wasting 10 years, of waiting, finally I have the closure I wanted too...just wish, that I am not that oxymoron...(-.-)...

Tue, March 19th, 2013 7:12am

Luwanda Lourens

Well done really liked it :)***


Mon, March 18th, 2013 5:55pm


Thanks Luwanda,

The truth is always hurts, in the end

Tue, March 19th, 2013 7:11am

thy blackpoet

nice piece....

Mon, March 18th, 2013 7:28pm



Tue, March 19th, 2013 7:09am


A long time to wait for someone who did not. There will be other loves and with the wisdom that this lose teachers, those loves will be more equal and satisfying

Heartfelt and honest poem, always be honest, even if it is just with yourself


Tue, March 19th, 2013 6:18pm


Hi Dibs,

Thanks for the warm words, indeed, I should be honest with myself, rather than just bottled it inside and take it as nothing

Tue, March 19th, 2013 5:36pm


I can/do relate, I feel many will-sadly.

(Maybe you need to work on your English Grammer?)Let me know if you want any help? I will try, if you want me to?Leave you email address on my profile page- if you do? I will contact you.
Apart from that, I feel this is a poem from the heart/life/so sad. many will relate.
Keep writing.I love your heart.
(May be you should write in your own language? & put up translations? Sadly a lot of meaning is lost in translation.(I know, I can't use grammer in many langusges either.)Just a suggestion for you to think about?

Tue, April 9th, 2013 12:54am


Hi poet...thanks for english has became rusty since i am rarely read english literature..except for scientific journals...i am currently writing up my research apologise for not be able to write more lately...since quite busy with work and studies...u are welcome to correct my english..vocabulary and grammar...since i am rarely write.,speak or use english language in my daily conversation...

Tue, April 9th, 2013 8:36am

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