Now That Your Gone

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Poem by: Alone in the World

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A way to tell a close friend, I hope he comes home, because I don't think I can live with out him...

Submitted: October 11, 2008

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Submitted: October 11, 2008

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Now That Your Gone

Here I sit,

Staring out my window,

Hoping that your car will pull up the driveway.

But nothing but the wind roars through the streets,

and I hang my head sadly,

wishing and watching,

Alone.

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EdwardJBradleySr

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Tue, October 14th, 2008 6:13pm

Drizzy:

Well written and presented. Most mournfully sad and, at the same time, hopeful.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

Spelling in title: Should read:

"Now That You're Gone" You might want to change it.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

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Tue, October 14th, 2008 6:37pm

Thanks! And thanks for pointing out the spelling error, should've noticed it, I'll fix it up!
~ Tiger

Brooke Gross

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Thu, October 16th, 2008 1:29pm

I remember when my best friend moved away, it was so sad at first, but eventually it hurt less. But I never forgot her. I saw her a few days ago actually, and it seems that she had forgotten me.

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Fri, October 17th, 2008 8:14pm

Awwww that's sad. Well, I hope she remembers, I've felt the pain of losing a best friend and they should remember you unless they are in rehab or something.
Xx~*Tiger*~xX