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Status: Finished  |  Genre: True Confessions  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem is well related to my life...because of which i was inspired to write a poem on this undiluted topic which evryone has to face now or then....DEATH.....

A Deep Thought.......Death Death…The word itself gives one a shrivel in his spine. Be it peaceful or horrifying. One has to embrace it once in a lifetime. Be it an infant, or a man to old. A lord or a lady too bold. For it is such an adjective which would surround you or would overpower you, In a blink of an eye that you would not even remember what were you up to. Many a people think wise for they think it is better to suicide , But mind you folks, One never gave it a thought that only for one bad thing that happened to you, You were ready to sacrifice ten good things which were not even born. And when this evil thought comes to your mind, Sit and think about it and just not chuck it as it is better to think about it seven times as silver is tested through fire to attain its purity and so does your thought need to attain it too. People who think they are useless and are told and reminded about it, Several times, Just give it a thought; What would have happened if you weren’t shrine.

Submitted: April 21, 2011

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Death and suicide are very common thoughts to those depressed. I'm glad that you brought out the fact that if you just hold on, things will improve. The analogy of silver being tested through fire is also a good comparison to life.

Sat, May 7th, 2011 4:27pm


Thank you for your comment :)....i myself had to think a lot in order to complete this poem and to bring out the true meaning of it.........

Sun, May 8th, 2011 4:40am

Moon Light

Wow this has made me have second thoughts about things in life. Thankyou ^_^

Sun, May 8th, 2011 1:24pm


Really....actually i must thank you instead of you thanking me for such a lovely comment.......well.....when i myself was writing this poem i had to weigh the pros and cons.....it was really mind drilling though...but it turned out to be a good one...:)

Sun, May 8th, 2011 11:00pm

Nocturnal Writer

This is really good. :) I can tell alot of effort went into writing this peice and I love the analogy of silver being tested through fire. Pure brilliance. :)

Tue, May 10th, 2011 3:50pm


omg...thank u soo much....i really appreciate it that you actually read my poems nd left back such a nice comment.....it really does mean a lot to me...

Tue, May 10th, 2011 9:00am

Ashley I Read

I love this poem! But it's more than just a poem, it is a message to many people. Something to open eyes I think.

Thu, October 13th, 2011 2:34pm


aawww...thank you soo soo much,,,this comment of yours means a lot to me...:')

Tue, October 18th, 2011 7:21am

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