The Forest

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

A very short poem about a mysterious forest.

The raven croaks a lonely tune,

While panthers prowl beneath the moon,

And weary travelers dare not wait,

Before they too become the bait. 


Submitted: February 16, 2017

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I'mAkitty

Really pretty and sweet! Loved it!!!

Thu, February 16th, 2017 2:08am

Stormbird Throneshaker

Short but amazingly powerful and to the point.

Thu, February 16th, 2017 4:26am

Melancholic Wisdom

Really short poems are always nice, they're so sweet and quick, they leave such a good taste in your mouth (figuratively) Good work, I loved it!

Thu, February 16th, 2017 5:26am

hullabaloo22

Short but descriptive. I liked it a lot!

Thu, February 16th, 2017 4:24pm

JE Falcon aka JEF

Short and with good visuals, nice...

Thu, February 23rd, 2017 6:47pm

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Thank you.

Thu, February 23rd, 2017 3:50pm

Thalia Bronwen

Beautiful and concise. Excellent work.

Fri, March 24th, 2017 10:36pm

Momina Khan

adorable :D

Fri, January 19th, 2018 10:47am

Jim Green

I love it. It is short but paints some wonderful vision and images like any good poem should I think. I hit the like button. I hope you are always inspire to post other things that paint wonderful visions and images with words.

Sun, February 4th, 2018 7:53pm

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