Short again. . . my poems aren't all that great, but already many people are being supportive, thank-you. I was upset when I wrote this awhile ago. Now it's sunny again :)

Rain has started falling,
A symbol of my pain.

The clouds, they started calling,
There was nothing left to gain.

Wash away my tears,
Be still, my hurting heart.

Take away my fears,
Undo my life apart.

Take me away,
Take me away,
To another day.

Submitted: December 29, 2008

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Demon 007

i love the rain, very nice poem it sounds like you have been in alot of pain just like me but hey what can i say it gets better it always does

Tue, December 30th, 2008 3:44am


It does always get better, that's what makes us believe we can live on to the next day ^^

Mon, December 29th, 2008 8:13pm

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