Unsolicited Opinion

Poem by: Amberly Sue

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A personal poem related to facebook and opinions pushed on others.

It is quite easy for others to say

It is of no consequence

Worry no more

Your problems will go away

They don’t comprehend

Life in Dante’s Inferno

Agonizing over details

Others don’t consider

Logic and rationale

Outweighed by the boulder

of excruciating concern

I push over and over

Lost forever in this anguish

I desire not this path

Longing for freedom

from my reason

Please…..

I pray you think twice

Before you dispense advice

For you will never feel

My torment is real

Submitted: December 15, 2013

Poetry torment inferno advise dantes

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Paliane

Nice! I can relate to this.

Sun, December 15th, 2013 4:47pm

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Thank you!

Tue, December 17th, 2013 12:05am

Nagz

i think this is really good one
i study poetry at university as well.. you kinda avoid using natural speech pauses.. like punctuation..
i think that will add something to the reader.. to know when to stop and breathe, if you know what i mean
great job

Wed, January 29th, 2014 11:27am

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Thank you for constructive feedback. This is what I am looking for. We all want to get better. Thank you!

Wed, January 29th, 2014 3:53am