its a inspirational poetry.which can help some to find himself and can boost his confidence up by tricks mentioned in poem.

I OPEN EYES WHEN THE SUN RISE

I FiND MYSELF WITH MANY SURPRIZE

WHO IS THE ONE INSIDE THE MIRROR

IT KICKS ME IN A BRAINSTORM

WHO am I??????

BEYOND THIS FACE......

WHAT IS INSIDE OF MY BRAIN..

EVERY PAST SEARCH OF MYSELF WENT IN  DRAIN..

EACH DAY ,I HAVE TO SEARCH MYSELF AGAIN..

SOMETIMES I FIND,SOMETIMES I DONT..

SOMETIMES I REMAIN in life's midroad...

how could i find the way to go...????

i m completly lost on way...

i dnt know whether i have to step up or i have to stay..

when i see towards my toe..

i find a tear fell on my foot..

my eyes are saying to think about a root..

it goes deeper as became old..

taller and greener trees are its prove..

find the outcome of your past life..

it will measure the root of ur existence ..

height of the tree is related to ur aceivements...

greenness of the tree is related to ur each days new and fresh life..

it will remind you who you are..

u have to work for making root deeper..

u have to prove yourself to making height taller...

.....

now when you would open your eyes...

you could be the one person ...

with all experience of past life....

need to aceive more n more

need to believe on yourself to grow..

 

 


Submitted: November 15, 2011

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Awe

I liked the beginning because it felt as is you were yelling at me. But, then I kinda got lost.

I bet you like texting huh? No one ever writes full words anymore.

..U knw wht i mn?

Tue, November 15th, 2011 9:24am

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