Thoughts Of The Dying

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

It's for the Past~Present~Future contest! :D


Submitted: June 23, 2011

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StephanieJane303

Wow! That's sad! Excellent job though! :)

Thu, June 23rd, 2011 8:24pm

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Thank you! :)

Thu, June 23rd, 2011 2:00pm

TheManWithManyWalls

I love it so much and yea 2nd comment :D not quite 1st but such is life. I always love twist endings like that, where one doesn't see it coming and then it hits them.

I love the transition and how you incorportate what was and what could be, then only at the end do we return to the present, it's genius.

Thu, June 23rd, 2011 8:40pm

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Thank you! :D

Thu, June 23rd, 2011 2:01pm

fallen ninja

wow. this was an amazing poem! i loved it so much. the ending was brilliant and all together it was just awesome :)

Fri, June 24th, 2011 1:47am

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Thank you so much! :D

Fri, June 24th, 2011 10:03am

peoplehateme101

LOOOOOVVVVVEEEEEEDDDDDDD IIIIITTTTT!!!!~SINGY SONGY VOICE~ kmu for any other poems!!!!!

Fri, June 24th, 2011 3:43am

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THHHHHHHHAAAAAAANNNNNNKKKKKKK YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUU!!!!! I will! :D :D :D :D

Fri, June 24th, 2011 10:02am

Wednesday

Wow this is A-Mazing! Loved everything about it! Great job! You definitely got a big like from me! xD

Fri, June 24th, 2011 4:57am

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Thank yoooooou! :D :D :D

Fri, June 24th, 2011 10:00am

2010Alana

Wow.
Wowowowowowoow.
That's really all I can say.
That was amazing, you're amazing.
~Alana;

Fri, June 24th, 2011 6:35am

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:'D You're soo sweet!

Fri, June 24th, 2011 10:02am

whiteroses

OMG!!!
THIS IS A-M-A-Z-I-N-G HUNNIE!!!
HOPE YOU WIN!!!
XOXOXOOXOX

Fri, June 24th, 2011 7:04am

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T-H-A-N-K Y-O-U!!!! :D

Fri, June 24th, 2011 10:01am

arun

Freaking great. I hardly could believe you had made it in a poem! I'm twisting my brain way too much to enter something for this contest. I thought it is never possible to write a poem. But wow, you're as usual great...

Fri, June 24th, 2011 1:48pm

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Thank you! :D and I'm sure you will think of something!

Fri, June 24th, 2011 9:59am

Stroke

this is really good its something I think I'de read again, it had a really nice feel to it

Sun, June 26th, 2011 10:48am

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Thank you! :D

Sun, June 26th, 2011 1:56pm

White Dragon

Really good. keep writing things like this are just wow.

Wed, June 29th, 2011 3:16am

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Thank you! :D

Wed, June 29th, 2011 12:27pm

dragon rose

That was an incredible poem! Im adding it to my reading list X)

Tue, July 12th, 2011 1:45pm

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Aww! Thanks! :D

Mon, July 18th, 2011 10:10am

glitter snow426

oh so frightening, I feel cold shivers!!! this is so awesome, cool and yes, quite terrifying ! GREAT WORK, I FELT THE FEAR!! Oh, I have two poems, happy and dark. The happy, Always Roses, Always Music and dark one, Forced Animal. Be in touch, Vincey

Wed, November 9th, 2011 6:43pm

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Indeed I will and thank you! ^.^

Thu, November 10th, 2011 7:36am

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