COMPETITION ! MUST READ !!
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COMPETITION IS NOW CLOSED: THANKS FOR EVERONE WHO ENTERED BUT THEY CAN ONLY BE ONE WINNER......... And you will all find out first thing tomorrow ! Sorry , I know I said Saturday but theres been a change of plan ! Keep your eyes peeled. I also changed the rules abit- There will be a 1st 2nd 3rd 4th and 5th place etc... !!!! hey ! Hey!! HEY !!!
Ok ! Listen up. This is my first ever competition ! The deadline is ........ NEXT SATURDAY ! So get your entriies in quick.
I HAVE HAD LOTS OF COMMENTS SAYING HOW I CAN INPROVE THE FIRST OPENING CHAPTER OF MY NOVEL JEOPARDY. (WHICH I APPRECIATE) . SO THIS COMPETITION IS GOING TO BE BASED ON THAT ! YOUR'E CHALLENGE IS TO RE-WRITE THE FIRST CHAPTER OF JEOPARDY. YOU MIGHT HAVE TO READ MY CHAPTER BEFORE SUBMITTING YOUR ENTRY ! YOU CAN EITHER DO THIS AS :
A. PUBLISH YOUR ENTRY CHAPTER AS YOUR OWN WORK ON YOUR OWN PAGE AND LET ME KNOW IF YOU HAVE ENTERD.
B. PUBLISH YOUR ENTRY CHAPTER INTO THE COMMENT BOX BELOW THIS PAGE.
C.PUBLISH YOUR ENTRY CHAPTER ON MY PAGE !
WINNER GETS A FAN REQUEST FROM ME & COMMENTS & LIKES ON ALL PEICES OF THEIR WORK ! & WILL GET THEIR WINNING CHAPTER PUBLISHED ONTO MY NOVEL JEOPARDY WITH FULL CREDIT TO THEM !
SO WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?! GET ENTERING !!!
GOOD LOOK !
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INSTRUCTIONS:
REWRIGHT CHAPTER ONE OF MY NOVEL JEOPARDY !
COMPETITION STATUS : closed
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My day started just like all the others. With boring math class. I sit next to my ex boyfriend, Josh. He has blonde hair and is usually quiet in math. I saw Brandon looking at me. As soon as he saw me looking at him, he smiled, then looked away quickly.
Some girls across the room yelled, "Hey! What are you looking at!" to me, so I looked away.
Everyone was getting nervous, because class should have started already, but hasn't, because our teacher, Mr. Dunn, was late. This isn't like him. He usually isn't late, and he usually has problems up on the board if he is late, but there isn't anything on the board.
Then the door opened. Everyone in the room quieted instantly. At the door, was a man. He has dark messy hair, blue eyes, and his face looked a bit unshaved. He had a gold ring on ear, and some sort of tattoo on his upper arm, which I could barely see. His t-shirt was black, and showed off his tan arms. Everyone was staring at him. Nobody dared to say a word.
'Was he a new teacher?' I asked myself. I sure hope not. He looked like he didn't want to be messed with.
Haha! I'm sooo in! :D *evil smirk*
Here;
I didn’t like school, it didn’t interest me.
I traced circles on the wooden table, breathing in slowly and letting it out just the same way. There was a bunch of whispers around me about a new teacher, but I slapped them away from my mind. None of the new teachers were ever interesting.
I sat in front of my ex boyfriend, we ended because he was just too immature. We still spoke from time to time, and I did miss running my fingers through his soft long blonde hair but I had a hold on myself.
I looked behind to notice Brandon looking straight at me. I gave him an awkward smile that he returned. We seemed to have this small kind of friendship that was passed on by smiles, it worked I could tell you that.
“What are you looking at?” Courtney and Ellie shouted across the classroom, causing me to jump a little and anger me. They were the two class cows, who every girl hate for the fact that they were so pretty and bitchy. I ignored their questions and shifted my eyes to look around the tables at the back and noticed, Abby, Jade and Liam sitting there. Abby was quiet, tall and pretty even with her hair up or down. I liked her. Sitting next to her was Liam, another quiet boy who was never exactly down on earth. More up in the sky.
Jade was sometimes funny, letting a smile and joke loose in class! She was a natural joker, although she didn’t like to show it.
Everyone talked for a while, getting louder and louder. Throwing paper planes, and immature spit balls. I sighed as one hit the back of my neck and wiped it off with the back of my sleeves.
“Everyone! Shut up!” I screamed, anger boiling as I felt the wind on the spit on the back of my neck.
I opened my mouth to say more but I was cut short by a clearing of the throat.
I spun around to see a man standing at the door. He had dark messy hair, deep blue eyes and a slight stubble. He had a gold ring in his ear, some tattoo’s on his upper arm (which were covered his top). The man wore a black T-shirt, showing his nice arms and everyone was staring at him. He had a frown set on his face and the silence added to that exact chill.
He was a man who didn’t want to be messed with!
I'll join!
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