Lonely but Perfect

Reads: 460  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 4

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

this poem is about how you really don't have to have a lover to be perfect you can be perfect in your own way and become the best thing ever.

Had my heart broken.

Stiched itup back with my tears.

Back on my feet.

Strong.

Powerful.

Feel likeI can concour the world.

I'm lonely but perfect.

Because I don't belong to anyone.

And no one belongs to me.

They ask me how i'm doing.

I say i'm loenly but perfect.

That's the wayI like it.

That's the wayI want it.


Submitted: April 06, 2012

© Copyright 2022 amnehquti. All rights reserved.

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Add Your Comments:

Comments

TatteredTime

Short and simple, I like! Though clear grammatical errors can make the feeling seem off. Still an interesting poem to be read. Be sure to check out my writing of Two Sides of Earth or anything else!

Fri, April 6th, 2012 9:15pm

Author
Reply

Ok thank you

Fri, April 6th, 2012 3:14pm

SmileValentine

i got what you wanna say..
nice poem

Sun, April 8th, 2012 9:16am

Author
Reply

thnks

Sun, April 8th, 2012 7:27am

Cosmic Crow

I didnt get the line, "because I dont to anyone." Is there a word missing? Other than that I really liked it. My favorite part is when you stitched up your heart with tears. Very good line that was. ~stay solid~

Thu, April 12th, 2012 7:22pm

Author
Reply

yea their was a word missing their i'll fix it lol

Fri, April 13th, 2012 8:57am

Desilu

I think it's better to be flawed but involved with people myself.
Your view is sad to me.
It is a thought provoking poem though and I like it.

Thu, May 3rd, 2012 2:31pm

Author
Reply

thnanks

Tue, May 8th, 2012 11:07am

Facebook Comments

Other Content by amnehquti