Duet:
I'll make another wish on a dimming satellite,
I'll hope and pray that this thing won't take another sleepless night.
Somewhere you’re thinking about her and falling in love: a perfect valentine,
Ooh-------------yeah----------
But clumsy words and melodies are just a waste of time.
Solo:
A girl can make you love her
a girl can make you smile :)
But if that girl shall dump you
you’ll get over it in a while.
A girl can make you love her
a girl can make you smile :)
But if that girl shall dump you
you’ll will get over it in a while.
Slowly Sing:
Many trails,
Many successes, many fails,
And we learn to deal with it.
Not sure which way to turn...
(Speak: It's a blind choice, really.)
That's the only way to learn
And to deal with it.
Submitted: October 11, 2008
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OH MY FRICKIN GAWD!!!!! YOU ARE AMAZING! PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU HAVE ANY OTHERS!
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Elizabeth May Lines
Aww, those are sweet lyrics. The contrast and flow in the whole of it makes it easy, sweet, and simple. The amazing dynamics you added are extremely powerful, like "a perfect valentine" and "clumsy words and melodies". It brings out the feelings that these lyrics most obviously have, and please continue writing! I enjoy song lyrics.
Sat, October 11th, 2008 3:01pm~ Elizabeth
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Thank you! I seriously thought it was terrible, to let you know. I'm glad to know wthat you like my writing!
Sat, October 11th, 2008 10:05am