22 days and 23 nights

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

22 days and 23 nights until he leaves..

dont know what to do ...

I’m counting down the days

The days where you would have to leave

Leaving me, and everyone else
For something better
For your hopes & dream
22 days

And 23 nights

You know I don’t want
You to leave
I want you by m side
Together, why can’t we be?
22 days
And 23 nights
Is never enough
Never enough to squash
Our life time together
Why do we have to be so far?
Too far to touch

22 days

And 23 nights

Is all that I have with you

 But we can never stay up
All night anymore

You need your sleep to be a superstar

We can’t ever have late night talk no more

22 days
And 23 nights
Until I miss your face

Until I don’t see you everyday of my life

What will I do when you’re gone?
On a journey, far be on
I’ll miss you… my love

Submitted: August 03, 2008

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i love it:)i need not say more, it's very touching and i can feel the emotion in this poem

Mon, August 4th, 2008 12:26am




Sun, August 3rd, 2008 11:38pm

Dark Skylight

Aww so wonderful and sad a bit.Im sorry about you.Coz your best friend is leaving.I hope you will still stay the best friends forever.


Tue, August 5th, 2008 12:52pm


best guy friend leaving...
ofcorse am sad... lol
but im also happy for him...
his gonna be a superstar..

Tue, August 5th, 2008 5:53am


i'm speechless!!
do tell me when you update more!

Wed, August 6th, 2008 9:16pm


thank you..




Thu, August 7th, 2008 3:50am


you've really given out the mood here. I love the way you wrote it, very creative!

Fri, August 8th, 2008 4:35pm



Fri, August 8th, 2008 6:16pm

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