Maybe, it's my heaven

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

So bare with me because this poem can be a bit confusing.
Basically it is baout a girl who savors in the memories of her past love. And even though it's hurting her to do so, she still holds on to the thoughts of him. She belives no mattter how painful losing him was, without him she would of never found happiness. He awakened her from her frozen state and showed her there was more to life.

Maybe, it’s my heaven
to look for his reflections
in the dark shadows
and hear his voice
tauntingly call my name.
Maybe, it’s my heaven
to remember feeling the sky so close
in the sunrays dancing off the window’s glass
and to only see the color of dreams in his eyes.
And it is better that he doesn’t know
what’s inside my soul.
That in my memories are only cold snowflakes.
I need him now.
while under my bare feet
are snow storms and ice.
He will never leave my thoughts.
And I am not ashamed to say
that it is LOVE!
His eyes in 3 minutes
burned my blood,
and I became lost
in the world of his arms.
So maybe, it’s my heaven
to wonder the streets, hiding the flowers of my heart
saving them from the bitter winds
and to lie that they are still blooming.
But typical, is it wasn’t for him
I would never welcome the sunrises
in this cruel world
where the hearts are divided by bridges.

Submitted: August 06, 2010

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A N Hadden

Your poem was beautiful! I really liked it.

Sat, August 7th, 2010 10:47am


Thanks a bunch!:)

Sat, August 7th, 2010 8:35am


wow, I never tell people their work is deep, but this truly is, i can relate to it, and i thank you for such a great poem xD

Wed, August 11th, 2010 5:52pm


thanks for a great comment :) i was worried people wouldnt understand it.

Thu, August 12th, 2010 5:31am


Your poem was simply wonderful,i loved every line.Sometimes when you really love a guy all you can think about is his eyes,and his arms.*smiles*

Sun, August 15th, 2010 1:53pm


thank you:)

Sun, August 15th, 2010 9:20am


I love it, the emotions of love you envoke, or more importantly, hidden love was impressive and very alive, good job :D

Mon, August 16th, 2010 6:29pm

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