Darkness Stares

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A kind of dark rhyming poem. About the feeling of being watched by something unseen in the dark of night.

Darkness Stares

Darkness invades the area as it gently curls,
Over the street in curly cue swirls.

The air is dry and so stale,
The sky seems so frail.

Sorrow is tangiable,
As time is so changeable.

Unseen stares,
Look upon it with open glares.

Submitted: March 22, 2008

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A short and sweet poem.can improve with more imagination and vision!Well done.

Sat, March 29th, 2008 10:18am


thank you. It was written as an english assignment. The rhyming wasn't an option. I liked writing it though.

Sat, March 29th, 2008 5:08pm


pretty good! keep up the good work!

Thu, April 3rd, 2008 11:49pm


Thank you. I'd hoped people would enjoy it. I'll try and check out your page too.

Sat, April 12th, 2008 9:27pm


this is good! Good writing!

Fri, April 4th, 2008 12:01am


Thanks its a poem I originally wrote as a class assignment for English. But glad you liked it.

Sat, April 12th, 2008 9:29pm

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