On The Inside

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Its a poem about my inner self. It describes how I see myself.

On The Inside

I am a mysterious creature

Wandering aimlessly through time,

With eyes of icy blue gray

Piercing the shadows of the darkest night,

Sorrowfully watching as peopl all around me,

Die from the world and it's violence.

Frozen into a block of ice,

My heart beats no more and I am numb


In my world, apart from theirs,

It is always winter here,

I am a cynical creature

Unique, nisunderstood, forgotten

Hungering for something that is always just out of my reach,

Dutifully watching, waiting, and crying

When it comes and passes me by,

Just out of reach...

I am a battle scarred creature

Submitted: March 22, 2008

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this is really good!!

Sat, March 22nd, 2008 9:13pm


Thank you. My writing has always been from the heart and this one was no exception.

Sat, March 22nd, 2008 6:19pm

Miriana Rosa

I like this!

Mon, March 24th, 2008 1:06am


I'm really glad you do, thanks for reading it.

Sat, March 29th, 2008 5:11pm


Lovely...I like the end, and the way you wrapped it up, though it feels slightly unfinished. Would there eventually be a second section?

Thu, May 22nd, 2008 12:40pm


Thanks and yeah probably will be a second section.

Thu, May 22nd, 2008 1:25pm



I'm not sure I can put into words what I see in this poem. It is....just.....I DON'T KNOW! lol

But for realz this is a very interesting piece of work and I love all of the images that I see when I read this.


Wed, June 25th, 2008 7:58pm


Thankz a bunch. i just luv to hear what my fanz have ta say. peace

Sun, July 6th, 2008 7:08pm

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