Thinking I should write.... HELP

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is my cry for help. I love writing and want too write a story on here, but I'm sorta new at this, so this is my novel idea, if you are interessted or want to help, READ ON, if not.....oh, you're gone, so if you're still reading THANK YOU!

Submitted: November 19, 2011

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Okay, I guess I'll start with the summary

 

"Belle was just you're average girl. She had a few freinds, rocked at basketall, did some theater, but other than that she was just invisable. She pretended not to care, but when her parents told her tht she would have togo to a new school after they moved, she jumped on the oprotunity to start a new life. At this new place, she found she was verry liked. Everything went well, and she was happy... until she found Seth, or rather, Seth found her. He was just a stranger who gave her an awful threat, or warning? "watch your back" She shakes it off but starts to find a power hidden inside of her. That is where Ash came in. Ash seemed to know the answers, but his green eyes warned Belle that she should stay away. But Belle had to get answers... she had to be neer Ash. He may have seemed sweet at first, but something else is hidden in him as well. Something evil, and intoxicating. What will become of this once innocent girl? Can Seth or Ash help her at all? What secret has been kept from her for so long?"

So I guess, that's all I have to say right now. Did I say too much? Too litle? If it sounds good, I can put up the first chapter, if it does not, tell me how I could make it better. I need your input. This "power" I menchend is not based on any prior fantasies or myths that I know of. I just came up with the idea. Also, thinking of a title.I'll say no more. So... Thanks alot.

P.S I dont understand why they dont have a pg 13 rating... but I guess this is pg 13..

(excuse my spelling and grammar please)(:


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