A Girl's Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A girl expressing her feelings to the love of her life.


“Love at first sight” was what I had heard off

It was the funniest thing, always making me scoff.

Seeing you, things started to change,

Felt uneasy when you weren’t in my range.

Friendship with you was a great ride,

My feelings were changing which I tried to hide.

Ultimately I lost the battle and my eyes said it all

The cupid did the magic and heaven started to fall.

And there we were, together and happy in love,

The journey still feels beautiful and peaceful like a dove.

The entire credit of my smile goes to you,

I love you completely without any woo.

I thank god for bringing me to this world,

As, I found you and got the chance to be curled.

You are my life and will always be

My love for you is endless making me glee.

And thus I dream to be your girl for my entire life,

As my fondness for you would go on even when I become your wife.

Submitted: April 22, 2012

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nice ",

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 11:06am


thank u...glad u took out time to read

Thu, April 26th, 2012 2:51am

Courtney Fields

I love this, i'm not sure if this was intended or just me but I also got a message of 'don't knock something before you try it' kind of thing which I really liked. Keep writing and I hope you can check out my poem "Freedom at last" and share your thoughts on it :)

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 12:35pm


thank you...glad you could connect with it...would surely read your work

Thu, April 26th, 2012 2:52am


Oh my gooooooooooooodneeeeeeeesssss!!!!!!!! This is one pure, awesome and incredible piece of poetry. It made my day. I'm I read this masterpiece- it made my day. It was pure coincidence. You really are a very talented poet. Jesus loves you.

Thu, April 26th, 2012 11:02am


oh wowww...what a nice and warm compliment...thank you...i am glad u liked it so much....

Thu, April 26th, 2012 4:04am

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