.Gold in sway.

.Gold in sway.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I put this poem on poetry.com when I was married so its under another name.

It's soft and flimsy,so innocently sweet.

What could it be I found at my feet?

Covering the field,I had to yeild.

Watching them sway to and fro

while they glistened of beautiful gold.

I left in peace that day,to return the next day.
There I sat watching beautiful gold in sway.


Submitted: April 04, 2009

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CriticalGeorge

ahhh, I liked it. The rythmic pattern was awesome! It's sweet! Nice Angel!

Sun, April 5th, 2009 6:10pm

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Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Sun, April 5th, 2009 11:11am

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