I got this poem published by poetry.com (book: Timeless Voices year:2006)

Lying down in a puddle of my thoughts
My room is dark and drought
Body an empty shell
People took me and left me in hell
Flutter-flutter I hear it in my head
Encouraged I hold my breath
I lie here lifeless
No hope left
If he finds me
Peace will bind me
From above comes my dark angel
Whip in hand--sees me bled
Open arms I have fled

Submitted: April 04, 2009

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Thats sad. The experiences we all go through time and time again. But the poem tells true with the thought of mind, as sadness may eminate from the mind. But the poem is a great expression of turmoil and pain...I loved it!

Sun, April 5th, 2009 6:12pm


Thank you, its one of my many favorites and I'm glad you loved it :)

Sun, April 5th, 2009 11:14am

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