People on the left,
People on the right.
Who is it I am tonight?
I am not here nor there
Am i anywhere?
Do they see me,
Do i fight,
Who is it I play tonight?
Seeking something, not sure what
What have I done but watch the clock
Now you see me, now you dont
Where have i gone? I surely dont know
My head starts to spin,
Then starts my yelling,
No one understands the hell I am suffering
What brought me here
I dont know
It always rains wherever I go
There is tomorrow, but like yesterday
All rolled in one, just another day
I am not hellbound, im already there
Nothing left inside, but a little bit of air
It changes so much i cant get in touch
As time passes by I stand with my crutch
The rage keeps burning,
My mind keeps hurting,
Caught in a whirlwind
Just turning and turning
Submitted: April 04, 2009
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Comments
This is beautifully tragic. You write well, so if you wrote this when you were 14 or 15, how old are these, then?
Sun, June 28th, 2009 2:58amFacebook Comments
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CriticalGeorge
I like your peom Angel. It is very much thought and true to real life. It is truly inspiring. It shows a lot of the things that go through the mind and how life comes at us in one way or another. Life must go on.
Sat, April 4th, 2009 9:55pmNICE POEM!!!^_^ Loved it!
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)
Sat, April 4th, 2009 2:57pm