First Love (A Poem By An Angel)

Reads: 235  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 0

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a poem I wrote after I had my frist love and first heartbreak.

First Love

Our Love was so sweet

Like honey

Our Love was pure and deep

Like the ocean

Our Passion was so firece

Like a tiger

But little did I know

You see that honey sweet love

That i so desprately tried to reach

Came with stinging bees

Bees that stung me over and over

Over and over

Covering my body with pain

Until I was left motionless

And still

They kept stinging

That love that was pure and deep

That ocean was cold

cold ans salty

And if I swam out to far

I would drown

That love would suffcate me

Then spit my body out

And finally

The Passion

That passion that was so firece

So true

Little did I know

Was dangerous

It would turn on me at any second

Attacking me

Mangling my body 

Devouring my poor



And thats what my first love

Did to me.  


Submitted: January 23, 2011

© Copyright 2022 AngelChild17. All rights reserved.

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Add Your Comments:

Facebook Comments

Other Content by AngelChild17