Supernatural

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem is about supernatural beings..I am entering this for the horror contest. Hope you enjoy :)

Black cats and witches, and piercing eyes

Devils and gypsies, and pitch black nights

Candels for seance, where all ghosts come through

Haunted houses, that scare the hell out of you

The dusk will come, as will the fall of the sun

Werewolves are on the hunt, so you better start to run!

Supernatural

Soup-Soup-Soup-Soup

Ghouls are lurking in the corners to kill

Demons will torture and scare, for the whole damn thrill

666 the mark of the beast

Grab all your pitchforks, tortches and hit the streets

The omens,the signs

Keep your eyes open or soon you will be in hell

Here it comes watch your back

The tide is rising, the darkness is under attack

The fear is there, it's deep inside

Humans have no choice, but to run and hide

We are prisinors, of the evil that dwells

Watch out for the witches and their magic spells.


Submitted: November 26, 2013

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elizabethrose

This is a major contrast to the type of stuff I write lol. It's interesting and I can certainly say it is scary in my book. Well done :)

Tue, November 26th, 2013 5:19am

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Thank you very much...glad you like it :)

Mon, November 25th, 2013 9:32pm

Alex The shadow girl

Nice scary poem. You're doing good. Good luck for the contest

Tue, November 26th, 2013 9:24am

Author
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Hi thank you very much :)

Tue, November 26th, 2013 1:30am

Hamna Bilal

nice

Tue, November 26th, 2013 11:51am

Jonathan DeLacuso

This was really freaky. It reminded of a part in The dark carnival were all the creatures rise up from hell to enjoy a feast of macabre. This was seriously awesome and I wish you the best of luck. Hope you will excell and takw home the gold (metaphorically speaking).

Tue, November 26th, 2013 12:42pm

Author
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Thank you very much :). I am glad that you liked it especially the fact that it reminded you of something...Thank you very much :)

Tue, November 26th, 2013 4:46am

panda window

cool imagery, nice poem! good luck :)

Tue, November 26th, 2013 1:44pm

Author
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Thank you very friend :)

Tue, November 26th, 2013 5:53am

39strypes

I love it, nice beautiful and scary.

Tue, November 26th, 2013 2:03pm

Author
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Thank you very much :)

Tue, November 26th, 2013 6:40am

Kenisha Liyanage

Nice poem. It reminded me of the black cat with green eyes in our next lane... Well done! Good luck...

Tue, November 26th, 2013 2:45pm

Author
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Thank you very much..I am glad that it reminded you of something :) thank you for your kind words :)

Tue, November 26th, 2013 6:55am

Read Aloud

This is very good! It gave me the chills!

Tue, November 26th, 2013 3:06pm

Author
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Thank you very much, I am glad that you liked it :)

Tue, November 26th, 2013 9:15pm

CSR Daniels

I feel like reading over this I had a flash back of every movie monster and supernatural event :) Loved it. Though not sure if it was meant to the soup-soup-soup part made me laugh (my immaturity no doubt) but great piece!

Tue, November 26th, 2013 7:51pm

Author
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Thank you very much, I am glad that yu liked it. I am glad that piece made you laugh it wa put there for some humour to the dark and scary poem :)

Tue, November 26th, 2013 9:15pm

Epicgurl123

Wow! This is an awesome poem! Xoxox

Tue, November 26th, 2013 9:15pm

Author
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Thank you very much I am glad you liked it :) xoxox

Tue, November 26th, 2013 9:12pm

city-lights

A very original and amazing poem. It gave me the shivers, a very thoughtful piece you have written. Amazing job!! Good luck in the contest.

Tue, November 26th, 2013 10:57pm

Author
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Thank you very much I am glad you liked. Thank you very much friend I appreciate it :)

Tue, November 26th, 2013 9:12pm

Your Little Nightmare

This is great! But for some reson it makes me want mac &cheese......

Wed, November 27th, 2013 2:56am

Author
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Thank you very much :) that is strange but awsome at the same time :)

Tue, November 26th, 2013 9:10pm

SoftDreamer7

Dang...What a good piece. It's so weird that I can visual this in a random movie scene. I'M SO WEIRD. XD

Wed, November 27th, 2013 3:28am

Author
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Thank you very much. That is a good thing. I don'tthink that is weird at all my friend :)

Tue, November 26th, 2013 9:09pm

SoftDreamer7

visualize* I'm so stupid too.

Wed, November 27th, 2013 3:33am

PatienceIsAVirtue

Great job! :)

Wed, November 27th, 2013 8:36am

Author
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Thank you :)

Wed, November 27th, 2013 12:38am

Shin Sora

Nice! this poem reminds me of Dracula,Frankenstein and other supernatural beings I read or watched.Great Poem.

Wed, November 27th, 2013 12:14pm

Author
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Thank you. I am glad that it reminds you of those things :)

Wed, November 27th, 2013 4:21am

FunWriting

Sorry just getting to my requests but... - Good work!! Good luck on the contest, I can see you winning from this piece :D I love horror more than anything so I know it and I have to say you did very good and I mean it on this horror piece :D Good luck!

Wed, November 27th, 2013 7:02pm

Author
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It's not a problem..Thank you very much and I am glad that you liked it

Wed, November 27th, 2013 9:53pm

Blake Star

In my opinion this can be a good contender for the top prizes in the concert. U hv great imagery and description and the poem flows as smoothly as silk THanks for the request it was worth it :)

Wed, November 27th, 2013 11:06pm

Author
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Thank you very much :) I am glad that you liked it

Wed, November 27th, 2013 9:51pm

LondonReid

A cute little rhyme. Sort of reminds me of a poem you learn in public school for the holidays :)

Fri, November 29th, 2013 5:36am

Author
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Thank you :)

Thu, November 28th, 2013 9:57pm

Christian Taylor

Nicely done! Wish you the best of luck in the contest! :)

Sun, December 1st, 2013 12:48am

Author
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Thank you very much

Sun, December 1st, 2013 9:50pm

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