IT`S MY PARTY! PART 3

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Jaidyn awakes to find she was in a stange place. She was confussed, and terrified. Clearing her head. Jaidyn realizes, she is`nt at her birthday party anymore. But where was she? How did she get there? More importantly.. Who took her? And Why? Thinking she was going to die. Jaidyn began to scream...

Submitted: February 13, 2009

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IT`S MY PARTY

PART 3 THE CONCLUSION

CARMELLS CHALLENGE

Jasmine returned to Connie's room to check on Jaidyn. When she realized Jaidyn had disappeared. She called the police. Jaidyn`s disappearance became headline news, and launched an all out search for her. Deputy's found a scarf assumed to belong to Jaidyn. After it was confirmed the scarf in fact belonged to Jaidyn. The detective questioned everyone at the party. Everyone, except Bryan. The detective suspected Jaidyn was kidnapped. He really needed to talk to Bryan....

The sound of helicopters woke Jaidyn. Her head hurt terribly, and she felt sick to her stomach. It was dark, and she could barely see. The only light in the room was coming from a crack in the wall. " Whats going on? " Jaidyn thought. She realized she couldn`t move. Her hands were bound, and tied behind her back. Jaidyn was getting really scared. She did`nt know what to do. Realizing she was`nt in Connie's room . She began screaming, " Hello! Can anybody hear me? Hello! " She yelled again. Jaidyn rolled off the bed, and made it to the wall. Looking through the crack, she peeked out. The only thing Jaidyn was able to see was trees. Trees everywhere. She realized, she must be in the country somewhere. " But where?" She thought. How did she get there? Suddenly! Jaidyn hears the door unlocking. Panicking, she runs back to the bed, and pretended she was still sleeping. The door opens slowly. A figure of a man stood there in the doorway.

Jaidyn lay there horrified. She wanted to jump up, and try to escape. But she felt frozen, and too scared to move. The figure started making his way towards the bed. Jaidyn started shaking all over, and trying hard to control it. The man reached to touch her. Suddenly! Jaidyn swings around, and kicks him right in his crotch. He fell over grabbing himself in pain. Jaidyn scrambles to the door to escape. The man grabs her feet throwing her to the floor. He starts beating Jaidyn in the face. Finally, with one hard blow. He knocks Jaidyn out cold. He began to rape her, over and over again. After he finished. He threw Jaidyn back on the bed, and left. Locking the door behind him.

Back at the cottage. Jasmine was trying so hard to figure out what could have happened to Jaidyn. The detective put out an APB on Bryan. Deputy's got a search warrant to check out Bryan's home. Bryan's uncle James was there. He was confused.

" Whats going on, he asked. Why are you people here? "

The deputy's brushed by him ignoring him. Finally the detective hands him the search warrant."We`re looking for Bryan, the detective informed him. Have you seen him?

Why? Bryan's uncle ask, confused.

The detective explained." He`s not in trouble. We need him for questioning."

Haven`t seen him,"James sneered.

A deputy comes into the living room with a strange look on his face. He looks at the detective. " Sir! I think you should come see this. "

The sun was going down. Jaidyn began to come to. She was cold, and in extreme pain. She felt like she had just give birth, and was bleeding. Her eyes were swollen almost shut. She knew she was going to die. Then Jaidyn hears a vehicle pulling up. She begins to panic. " He`s coming back to hurt me again," she thought. This time Jaidyn was`nt` going to let him hurt her. But she needed a plan. Straining to see through her swollen eyes. Jaidyn had to find something to cut the duct tape that had her hands bound. Finally, she noticed one of the bed posts had a ragged edge. Jaidyn slides the tape across it. Using strong quick strokes cutting herself in the process. She was free at last.

Jaidyn hears a commotion outside the door. She finds a two by four behind the door. Jaidyn grabs it . She hides, and waits for the door to open. The door slowly opens. Jaidyn raises the board aiming for her target. As the figure enters. She swings the board. Suddenly a hand grabs it. Jaidyn starts screaming, and beating the man. Then she sees dozens of flashlights. The detective grabs Jaidyn`s arms.

" It`s OK! Jaidyn. Your safe, he told her." Overwhelmed with relief. Jaidyn starts to cry. The detective holds her. " There now, he consoled her.Your going to be fine. "

Sitting in the police station. Was Jasmine, and Jaidyn`s grandparents. The detective was going over the report with Jaidyn. Two deputy's brought Bryan through in handcuffs. Jaidyn looked at him. Her eyes full of fear. But Bryan's eyes were full of hatred. The detective explained to Jaidyn, what they had found at Bryan's house.

" Bryan's parents separated because his dad had an affair. An affair with you Jaidyn. She looks at the detective, ashamed. It seems Bryan's dad took his life. In the very cabin we found you in. He couldn`t take losing his marriage, and the publicity would have ended his career. Bryan's dad knew he would do a lot of time for having sex with a minor. Bryan grew to hate you for that. We recovered numerous notes on how to kidnap someone, and get away with it. We also found a goodbye letter addressed to his mother. He planned to kill you, and then himself. Your a very lucky young lady.

" Jaidyn looked at her friend Jasmine.She couldn`t believe what had happened.Then she finally had to face her grandparents. To Jaidyn. It will be her ultimate torture.

END


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