Guardian (dedicated to my grandma)
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Poem by: Angelsong
I'll never forget
The way you held my hand
How you opened my eyes
When the darkness
Had taken over me
You never let go
Of me
And if tonight is the night
When the truth becomes a lie
When your fears come to life
When there's nothing to do but hide
All I need to make it through
Is a moment in time
With you
One wish I ask of you
A wish of your love, so true
Please remain by our side
Stay to guide us through life
Every time you are near
All the wounds in my heart
Begin to heal
Because I know
My guardian
Is watching over me
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*sob* Aw....*sob*
That was great! i'm sure ur grandma is proud!
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thank you very much ^_^
This is a wonderful sentimental piece.
Great job!
Take Care,
Anastasia
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thank you ^_^
SNIFF..
have tears in my eyes.
I'm sorry for your loss.
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thanks ^_^ and thanks again :)
wow,awesome poem, seriously- simple yet full of feeling :)
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yay! lol thanks :)
Wow. This is such a beautiful piece, and as a lot of these guys have said, there's a feeling in this. I can't help but think that it's something only experience can bring.
I'm sorry for your loss.
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it's okay ^_^ i appreciate that =D
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This is a beautiful poem and a wonderfult tribute. You Grandma would love it.
xoxox
Fantasy
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thank you ^_^
I found this poem really touching. I actually just found out that a member of my family has passed away. i hope to see more amazing poems and stories like this one.
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thank you ^_^ and i'm truly sorry for your loss :( i know what it's like
I can relate to this I got to see my grandma the day before she was ready for her journey to heaven. Her mind set she was ready to go away from the pain. And her aura was violet. I feel that when loved ones pass they sometimes stay and comfort the loved ones before going to heaven or going up to heaven and then come back to check one loved ones. May you can relate to this and read "Comforting Angels", and "Awakening Angel". Please if I am like a bull in a china shop with my words. Peace Love Harmony and God Bless. nos
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will do. thank you ^_^
You write very good poems that touch the heart and soul. nos
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thankies :D
This is very very good and it kinda hit me hard cause I am in the process of losing my grandma. I hope you are doing well now, and I hope you continue to do so.
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thank you ^_^ and i truly hope your grandma gets better :(
Wow, that's beautiful. I think this would be an awesome song. :)
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thankies ^_^ i did make a remake of this poem and made it into a song. if i can get it onto my comp i might put it somewhere :) thx for reading and commenting :D
So sorry to hear about your grandmother.I lost my brother a couple years ago to suicide.He was only 29.I wrote a couple poems about him as well.It's never easy to lose someone you love.I do believe they still watch over us.Great poem.
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i'm very sorry for your loss.
i appreciate your taking time to read ^_^
You know, I think she knew how much you loved her, it must have showed, even if you don't seem to think so. This poem described your emotions well.
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thankies ^_^ i really hope you're right about that
truly sweet
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thank you very much :D
you miss her ive never had that chance too, but with my grandfather its been five years now, i still miss him. take care dracco
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i'm truly sorry for your loss. you have my prayers. thank you for your time, and take care as well
Awww, I'm sorry for your loss... I don't know what it's like to lose someone, but now I know. Your piece of work had me feel like someone in my family had died. Wow!...... Good work I loved it.
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thanks for that. and thanks for reading :)
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Thank you for sharing. I just lost my grandmother not too long ago in an pedestrian accident and this has helped me. Thank you.
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Truly, I am sorry for your loss.
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