Guardian (dedicated to my grandma)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

my grandmother died in a car accident, and i didn't get a chance to tell her what she meant to me. i decided to put how i felt into a song, and i'd like to share it here. =)

I'll never forget

The way you held my hand

How you opened my eyes

When the darkness

Had taken over me

You never let go

Of me

And if tonight is the night

When the truth becomes a lie

When your fears come to life

When there's nothing to do but hide

All I need to make it through

Is a moment in time

With you

One wish I ask of you

A wish of your love, so true

Please remain by our side

Stay to guide us through life

Every time you are near

All the wounds in my heart

Begin to heal

Because I know

My guardian

Is watching over me


Submitted: January 07, 2009

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According2Raven

*sob* Aw....*sob*
That was great! i'm sure ur grandma is proud!

Wed, January 7th, 2009 8:32pm

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thank you very much ^_^

Sun, January 18th, 2009 9:46pm

Anastasia Starlena

This is a wonderful sentimental piece.
Great job!

Take Care,
Anastasia

Thu, January 8th, 2009 4:26am

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thank you ^_^

Sun, January 18th, 2009 9:45pm

Bellamyforever

SNIFF..

have tears in my eyes.

I'm sorry for your loss.

Thu, January 15th, 2009 3:33pm

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thanks ^_^ and thanks again :)

Sun, January 18th, 2009 9:24pm

ForlornThoughts

wow,awesome poem, seriously- simple yet full of feeling :)

Fri, January 16th, 2009 4:43pm

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yay! lol thanks :)

Sun, January 18th, 2009 9:24pm

Alcatraz

Wow. This is such a beautiful piece, and as a lot of these guys have said, there's a feeling in this. I can't help but think that it's something only experience can bring.

I'm sorry for your loss.

Mon, January 19th, 2009 3:30am

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it's okay ^_^ i appreciate that =D

Sun, January 18th, 2009 9:19pm

Jasmine 27

I found this poem really touching. I actually just found out that a member of my family has passed away. i hope to see more amazing poems and stories like this one.

Wed, January 28th, 2009 5:15am

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thank you ^_^ and i'm truly sorry for your loss :( i know what it's like

Wed, January 28th, 2009 3:13pm

NoS482

I can relate to this I got to see my grandma the day before she was ready for her journey to heaven. Her mind set she was ready to go away from the pain. And her aura was violet. I feel that when loved ones pass they sometimes stay and comfort the loved ones before going to heaven or going up to heaven and then come back to check one loved ones. May you can relate to this and read "Comforting Angels", and "Awakening Angel". Please if I am like a bull in a china shop with my words. Peace Love Harmony and God Bless. nos

Thu, January 29th, 2009 11:00pm

Author
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will do. thank you ^_^

Thu, January 29th, 2009 3:06pm

NoS482

You write very good poems that touch the heart and soul. nos

Thu, January 29th, 2009 11:01pm

Author
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thankies :D

Thu, January 29th, 2009 3:07pm

Kelsey Lynn

This is very very good and it kinda hit me hard cause I am in the process of losing my grandma. I hope you are doing well now, and I hope you continue to do so.

Sat, February 7th, 2009 3:00am

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thank you ^_^ and i truly hope your grandma gets better :(

Fri, February 6th, 2009 7:04pm

viper

So sorry to hear about your grandmother.I lost my brother a couple years ago to suicide.He was only 29.I wrote a couple poems about him as well.It's never easy to lose someone you love.I do believe they still watch over us.Great poem.

Wed, February 18th, 2009 5:03am

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i'm very sorry for your loss.

i appreciate your taking time to read ^_^

Wed, February 18th, 2009 3:33pm

swedish fish

You know, I think she knew how much you loved her, it must have showed, even if you don't seem to think so. This poem described your emotions well.

Sun, February 22nd, 2009 8:58pm

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thankies ^_^ i really hope you're right about that

Sun, February 22nd, 2009 3:11pm

skydarkangel26

truly sweet

Sun, March 1st, 2009 12:38am

Author
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thank you very much :D

Sat, February 28th, 2009 4:39pm

oricesdracco

you miss her ive never had that chance too, but with my grandfather its been five years now, i still miss him. take care dracco

Mon, March 16th, 2009 3:00am

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i'm truly sorry for your loss. you have my prayers. thank you for your time, and take care as well

Mon, March 16th, 2009 7:18pm

Ve Ce Wall

Awww, I'm sorry for your loss... I don't know what it's like to lose someone, but now I know. Your piece of work had me feel like someone in my family had died. Wow!...... Good work I loved it.

Sat, March 21st, 2009 12:52pm

Author
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thanks for that. and thanks for reading :)

Sat, March 21st, 2009 11:41am

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