Hungry, hungry Lewis

Short Story by: Animal lover

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Lewis comes home and is very hungry... but what should he eat?

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Submitted: January 11, 2012

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Hungry, Hungry Lewis

 

One day When lewis came home, from a big day of play at nursery, his tummy went "Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!"

Lewis was hungry. So he went to the fridge and got out...

1 cup cake. And...

Gobbled it all up. Then hed got out...

2 strawberries. And...

Gobbled them all up. Then he got out...

3 pizzas. And...

Gobbled them all up. Then he got out...

4 sweets. And...

Gobbled them all up. Then he got out...

5 bits of chocolate. And...

Gobbled them all up. BUT THEN...

Mummy said "Lewis, wheres all my food gone?!"

OOPS!!!!

 

This is a story i wrote for my little brother for his birthday and i was wondering if it was any good.

Please comment if you like this and if you would read this to a child.

my siblings love it!!! and i hope you do to.

Animal Lover xxx

:)

 


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