It's Not Ok

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
This isnt my best writing, but I like it. It doesnt rhyme, but it flows (in my opinion). I know Im not the best writer, so I'd love to hear your comments/criticizing.

BTW: The picture of the kid laughing isnt mine. I found it on Google. Just had to let you know! ^_^

Submitted: June 26, 2008

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I smile at my friends and family
I laugh so hard that I cry
I run around the playground
screaming and yelling happily
I make funny faces
My friends think I'm ok and happy
My family thinks nothings wrong
My teachers think I'm the smart class clown
Everyone thinks I brighten a room with fun
I'm not really always happy
I don't always laugh at stupid things
People don’t know what I think or feel
I don’t think about suicide
But I'm not the normal person either
I have problems that keep me awake all night and I'm only 11
I worry about things I shouldn’t
I worry about if dad will move out of his sister's house
I worry if my parents would start fighting again if they lived together
I worry if my family has enough money
I worry if my family will be together again
I shouldn’t worry about adult problems…
not when I'm only eleven
I wonder about things too…
Well, one thing
I wonder when I can just be a kid a quit pretending everything's ok when it's not


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