My Brother In A Game World

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a poem i wrote while watching my brother playing his xbox360 console.

As i sit and watch my brother,

playing xbox in his room.

I wonder what the fuss is,

when he's in his gameful mode.

What is so interesting,

about the game he's playing now.

Winning makes him so happy,

but losing makes him frown.

He twists and turns his body,

as if he's actually in the game.

Sometimes when i am calling him,

he barely hears his name.

Shouting abusive words,

at the players he's against.

Come on my brother it's just a game,

why get yourself so tense.

It's like living in a world of game,

maybe that is what he sees.

My brother on his xbox,

is the gamelife he seems to live.


Submitted: April 09, 2012

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Thats really good hun, it best describes my brother too lol x

Mon, April 9th, 2012 2:43pm


Lol, i think it describes alot of young males. Every guy i know does it

Tue, April 10th, 2012 5:45am


Nice poem sis.........
Very informal type......and I like it that way.....

Mon, April 16th, 2012 11:31am


Thankyou :)

Tue, April 17th, 2012 4:00am

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