Please tell me...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Please tell me...

Please tell me what you would think of me,

if you looked straight into my eyes.

Would you see me as an innocent love,

or a unwanted devil full of lies.

 

Please tell me what you would say to me,

if you knew i had troubles deep within.

Would you help me by telling me the truth,

or would you let my problems overcome and win.

 

Please tell me how you would show me love,

because i have never truly been loved before.

Would you show me that there is someone for me,

or would you let me hurt a little bit more.

 

Please tell me if you'll always be true to me,

and your not willing to break my heart.

because i don't wish for you to treat me bad,

then suddenly just want to part.

 

Please let me tell you what i would do,

if you walked straight into my life.

I would be the most honest and faithful love ever,

I'l make you want me to be your wife.

 

 

 

 

 

 


Submitted: April 17, 2012

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SPURIOUS

Nawww that is sweet :) I really liked it. Great work and keep it up :)

Tue, April 17th, 2012 10:24am

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Thankyou so much :)

Tue, April 17th, 2012 4:01am

son of the soil

sometimes at heart we feel pain caused by our my mere refleaction of our burdern and we turn to be afraid of love but by this time i swear to my maker that i will love my girlfriend to the day she becomes my wife and i'ts only because of you thank you,you have a good heart keep on doing it.

Tue, April 17th, 2012 11:06am

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Awww thankyou 3so much and yes what you said is all true :) I am glad you have said what you have said. :)

Tue, April 17th, 2012 4:15am

Princess21

So sweet poem.

Tue, April 17th, 2012 11:33am

Author
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Thankyou :)

Tue, April 17th, 2012 4:35am

Lozziej90

I love this, very touching and sweet Hun, I'd feel like that myself if I had feelings for someone x

Tue, April 17th, 2012 12:43pm

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Thankyou :)

Tue, April 17th, 2012 6:07am

Dredge

Beautiful poem........
I love reading it !

Tue, April 17th, 2012 3:34pm

Author
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Thankyou very much :)

Tue, April 17th, 2012 9:01am

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