"Unconscious Dimension."

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

What if future events are already programmed by destiny itself? Maybe our life is already finished if seen from another galaxy...

When I am alone in the darkness I usually get to think about life and time. All the actions that I’ve done in a single day, they're all gone for eternity. Everything made now an unchangeable past.

What if what we are living right now has actually happened and the future is already written for us by now?

We go through life just working, studying, and basically doing the same everyday actions over and over again. Say, for example, that the Sun’s light is already 8 min. old once it hits us here on planet Earth. 

The Sun’s history has now been written. If we were to travel 8 min. into the future, we would see new rays coming out from its surface at that very precise moment.

Yet even then, we are only thinking about the next living second of ours right now.

When we do things that are common for us like sitting or walking, we don’t even notice that our time is limited. We think that we are eternal.

Each action we do is done because we are following a main life story patron. 

Its history has already been written. 

You may say and wonder that we change actions and make choices every second or moment, but these were just simply meant to be. 

It's all because they have already been stated in that patron in such a way. It is it who tells us when we are supposed to make them. Even for good or bad situations. Subconsciously.


Everything has already been written somewhere in the future.

Thousands of light years away, a new life has just begun. For it, ours is only an already forgotten thing from the past. A turned off neon light finished event. 

We are a movie. Acting and transforming what’s scripted into a meant reality. Living it with feelings to give it a sense in all.

The thing is we just don't know how to transmit feelings to the world, for if we speak, words would probably only be gone with the wind. Nowhere to be found or be heard again. Finding only a state of static vacuum everywhere.

What if then feelings are just shining rays that are trying to control our everyday paths? The paths already made, the paths of continuous infinity...

Perhaps someone in the future who is outside from our known far away limits is by now studying our own history: our own choices. 

The complex life pane we are living thoroughly seen from other domains. 

Maybe our life is already finished... then again, maybe not.

That's the scary feeling we want to prevent… yet it dares to strike us with absolute fearful force.

Is that why fear is known to be as an uncontrollable, despised feeling?

Close your eyes and think of what is surrounding you right now, everything you are touching and hearing.

Open your eyes and think of life as a television program. Just waiting for you to grab the control remote and turn it on. As the channels begin to slowly focus, we begin to ask ourselves…


When is this program supposed to really start making its lifetime debut? Is it by all means what’s lurking inside us? A melody of faith? 

An icy cold feeling that makes us be like curious little kittens?

When will it be the forsaken time to finally state: it has begun?

What if what we are living right now is just another unconscious dimensional dream? 

Submitted: June 16, 2015

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Liam Strong

Your analogies are written thoroughly well, I must say! Almost like aphorisms. As musings, you have a lot of good material to work with; as a poet, I noticed plenty of good lines to form verse from, and if you wanted, you could do the same and expand the creativity. This isn't exactly my subject of choice, not my cup of tea, but even so, it amused me and it's very well written. My suggestions, however, are to be careful of how you would make this flow in some beyond miscellaneous musings: the overall tone is very ephemeral and serious, so at the end, with the curious kitten analogy, I became confused. As a montage of questions to stifle with, it's great! Thanks for sharing!

Tue, June 16th, 2015 7:26pm


Thank you so much for your awesome feedback!!
I'm very glad you enjoyed it! :)

Tue, June 16th, 2015 4:48pm


Fantastic piece of work! I enjoyed it! I'll be watching for more like this!

Sun, June 28th, 2015 4:23am


Thank you!! I'm very happy that you enjoyed it!! Stay tuned for more! Thanks! :)

Sat, June 27th, 2015 11:32pm


Hey, sorry it took so long for me to read this. This is an amazing piece of work and I'll most definitely check out some more work of yours.

Fri, August 7th, 2015 11:34pm


Thank you so much for your time and for the great feedback!! I'm really glad you liked it! :)

Fri, August 7th, 2015 6:24pm


This is a really interesting piece. It makes the reader think and ponder on existential matters. It is well written and sends the reader exactly where it intended to. You chose your words carefully and your point was clearly made and developed smoothly throughout your text.
Now, I'm not a believer of fate as a pre-written thing that cannot be escaped or re-written but I definitely agree that our time is limited and should be used carefully though to the full.
This is a nice piece you've got there; it should make a lot of people think.Very good job!

Thu, May 5th, 2016 10:49am


Thank you very much!! I'm really happy that you found it interesting!! Thank you for the nice feedback!!
Thank you!! :D

Thu, May 5th, 2016 2:11pm

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