My Christmas Story

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How i feel today on Christmas

My Christmas Story

It's Christmas here in the East.
I walk outside in my old jeans and a tanktop I found in my closet.
It's almost 80 degrees and it feels great.
The sun is shining, the sky is blue, and it's one of the happiest days of the year.

We open presents at home first...
I get exactly what I asked for
Then we go down the street to grandma's house
And we laugh because she's still in her PJs.
We open gifts here too...
She always knows what to get.

Now I must wait for the rest of the family to show
So we can all exchange gifts as well.
Then I must wait another long year...
For this wonderful feeling to come back to me.


Submitted: December 25, 2008

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Sasha Neko

I love it. It really eminates with the feeling of calm love and sweet joy. Most people will end up overwhelming the poem with actions and trying to pump it full of joy and I hate that, you just let the feeling seep in as if of its own accord. I love it.

Mon, January 19th, 2009 4:54am

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thanx :D i wrote it on christmas so i just wrote what i was feeling at that moment :D

Mon, January 19th, 2009 7:31am

yuu shindemura

it's what christmas season is all about! hehe nice anonymous23 or kei-chan as you might be called. ;)

i usually have forgotten what a christmas feeling is, but in this poem you preserved it! XD great work!

Tue, February 17th, 2009 1:04am

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thank u so very much!!!!! i had forgotten that same feeling but when i got in front of the computer it just all came out...then i reminded myself and got that feeling back...XD
(u can call me kei-chan if u want...i don't mind :D)

Fri, February 20th, 2009 2:13pm

yuu shindemura

hehe yeah, christmas like this is kind of nonexistent...i miss it...T.T

but you still remember it, that's cool even if you juz rmember it when you sat in fron of your PC. hmmm...why you like nightfall or night times?XD nocturnal? hehe me too! i think i'm insomniac...the physician says so but i can sleep around 2am. well, that's that...but anywayz, i like night time...i always do those stories i have at night, so i can get the gothic feeeling.XD

Mon, February 23rd, 2009 1:16am

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i love nighttime b/c i live in the country (sort of) and the view of the stars so clear...i love looking up at them...it gives me peace

Tue, February 24th, 2009 3:09pm

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