blank snow

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

i was on a road trip and i was bored so i wrote a poem with my mom. she wrote the first 4 lines and i wrote the rest lol. hope you enjoy :)


we go outside

and what do we see?



the blank canvas

that is the world



by man's evil

its surrealness

still untouched

by the twisted lies

we call reality

by the corrupt souls

we call leaders

a blank canvas

to begin again

another day

to change

Submitted: December 30, 2008

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This is clever and original. I like the use of language and the metaphors. It's tough to be surrounded by man's evil every day yet we still expect change even though it may never happen

Sat, January 3rd, 2009 1:49am


thanks!! im glad you get it! :)

Fri, January 2nd, 2009 7:09pm

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