the beast i see

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

not about monsters or something... just about the person the storyteller blames for the departure of a loved one.

I look
See
I see the monster
That drove you away
The beast
That took you from me
Caused you leave
I hate her!
You’re gone
From my life
Disappeared
Swallowed by the night
Because of whom
I see
You left me
Took my heart
Squished it into that
Faded brown suitcase
Between your possesions
You ripped me apart
When you ran
So I blame her
The one I see
Before me
I hate her
I don’t know what to do
So I turn away
Turn away
From the mirror…


Submitted: January 06, 2009

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Samantha Mackie

i like it. I wasn't expecting the end. I love stuff when the ending surprises you like that

Tue, January 20th, 2009 3:03am

Author
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thanks :)
yea, i love making a twist at the end in my writing XD
im glad u like it!

Tue, January 20th, 2009 11:58am

guff01

Nice little critique of a self image that is not liked. Nice twist ending. Good work

Fri, January 23rd, 2009 2:22am

Author
Reply

thanks :)

Tue, February 10th, 2009 4:22pm

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