This is a dedication to someone i love who i am hoping to reach out to by expressing the way i feel about her.

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Submitted: May 21, 2013

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ValeriyaPonomar

Very beautiful! I can tell you really care about her! "You know a man loves you when he starts writing poetry" my favorite line from somewhere I can't remember haha. This poem had a light feeling to it, almost like you're writing a gift to her. Sorry if I don't make any sense, I tend to do that a lot. Amazing job! Keep me updated with poems and articles if you can :)

Tue, May 21st, 2013 1:06pm

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You are so right and she was worth more then words can ever describe. I am lucky indeed ^_^

Wed, May 22nd, 2013 1:11am

Zaneerah Y

AWWWWWWW!! First of all, I love how you made this poem! And wow BEAUTIfull words you have there too! Please do keep me up dated on your poems cuz I enjoy reading them!! Thanks for sharing :P

~Angel

Tue, May 21st, 2013 10:30pm

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No problem Angel I can tell this got to you and she enjoyed it just as much. I'm sure she had the same reaction you did as well ^_^

Wed, May 22nd, 2013 1:10am

Lisa Ayers

I do like the design you utilized. It was hard for me to read without the option of enlarging the picture. But it is absolutely beautiful! Any woman would be honored to be on the receiving end of this priceless poem! I sure hopes she is as moved by it as I am

Wed, May 22nd, 2013 4:44am

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Thank you Lisa your critique inspires me ^_^

Wed, May 22nd, 2013 1:09am

Tatia22

I wish every guy could write poetry. Just the fact that you even wrote one says a lot about you and how you much you care about her. Very beautiful and romantic! Lovely poem. Gets a like from me! Thank you for sharing :)

Fri, May 24th, 2013 12:59am

Lady Cataluna

It looked and was a beautiful read. Thanks for the comment you left me.

Tue, May 28th, 2013 11:23pm

PizzaPoet

I can really feeling your pure emotion that you put into
this. She's your love and I can tell that nothing and no
one will ever change that. Beautiful work!

Tue, July 2nd, 2013 2:43pm

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TY pizza poet that means the world to me. Awesome for you to share ^_^

Tue, July 2nd, 2013 9:06am

Coralie

This was a really great poem. There was so much emotion and skill packed into it, and I could feel exactly what you meant with literally every word. And the way you have it in a picture is really cool!

Wed, July 3rd, 2013 1:29pm

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Thank you Coralie i really try and write from the heart and if it driven by something then it flourishes even more. Ty for your generous insight ^_^

Fri, July 5th, 2013 7:27am

Criss Sole

This was so beautifully written. And I really liked the background you used. I'd feel honoured if someone ever wrote a poem like that about me.

And thank you so much for the comment you left on my work.

Sun, July 7th, 2013 8:48am

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Anytime Criss and I'm glad you got a rise out of my romantic side ^_^

Sun, July 7th, 2013 6:45am

Effy Roams

Awwwww, it's...beautiful is used some many times here, I'd go with, alluring. I loved how did just wasn't "out of the blue" you wrote it for someone right? Just words, trying to describe only what you've seen in movie? Whether it was or wasn't, this is magnificent.

Mon, July 29th, 2013 2:24pm

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Thank you and yes i wrote this for a special someone who i cherish dearly ^_^

Thu, August 1st, 2013 4:20am

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