For the Final Time

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

For the final time is basically for those who love to live for other's and move's away silently from life

For the final Time

For the final time myself feel for you,

For the final time myself will think of you!

Yes for the final time………..

Time is felting, ts running like a blowing river,

Little little, thou little time left in thy hand!

o. thy love, this time, do forgive you;

This time do bless you; yet receiving the deep routed dishonor,

I will never complain to thy almighty,

But surely will question him,

 I know thy answer will not heel thy wound,

But surely, thou answer will kill the temptation,

Miss u, miss u o thy love,

For the final time coz thou breathe is crossing,

 the final lap…..!!!!!



Submitted: November 04, 2012

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looks like you figured it out. good job.

Sun, November 4th, 2012 9:35am


yup.. iwill share the feedbck shortly

Sun, November 4th, 2012 12:15pm


how's d poem?

Sun, November 4th, 2012 12:17pm


I'm not much of a poet, so take what I say with a grain of salt. The Thys, Thous, and Thees can get confusing. Plus I am not sure if you used them correctly all the time, which can be even more confusing. The message was fine, and the flow worked.

Overall, good job.

Sun, November 4th, 2012 9:06pm

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