This is a poem about embracing death.

Sitting still with a knife in hand

I just wish someone would understand

The pain was ceased

But came back with ease

Now I bleed my final breath

Laying ready to embrace my death


Submitted: March 01, 2013

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MidnightAddict

Nice rhyming and poem. :)

Sat, March 2nd, 2013 3:28am

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Thank-you soo much ^.^

Fri, March 1st, 2013 8:00pm

Km2

I agree, nice rhythm. Good flow as well. Nice little poem. Glad to be your first like. Very passionate and beautifully, stunning composition. Do come check out my works, too, if you like? I'm sure you will find something you will enjoy. :)

Wed, March 20th, 2013 5:46am

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Alright, I will be glad to return the favor. :)
Thank-you!

Tue, March 19th, 2013 10:51pm

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