Suicide note challenge

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so I thought of a challenge idea...it Used to be my own thing but i wonder how people will make of it....it was actually basically i real suicide note meant for my parents after my death but now it is of no use for me...

Submitted: August 29, 2010

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So, here is how it is...the following SUICIDE NOTE was written by me when i was feeling like you know...killing myself...some of you might have already read it...and yes i admit...it is a treasure of errors...

Talking of the business, so you have to mend it's errors and proceed on with your own poem/story/novel whatever...

now...just choose upto 1-30 number and i'll provide you genre in which your story should go(is this line grammatically correct? i don't think so)anyways...as I am not a great writer myself...the story will be judged by number of likes...veto power is still in the hands of creator which in this case is me

RULES(you don't really have to follow them but they do fetch you points)
1) i'll love it if participants read at least 3 of their fellow participant's entry
2) if it is a novel please provide shorter chapters because i get bored reading long ones...
3) all entries should be submitted before October 25th(just a random date i might change it) though i'll accept entries before i have posted results...

do we need more rules? nah! i hate rules but i love seeing others following them

PRIZES!!!!!!!

1st prize: I'll refer 1st prize winner to everyone i know on booksie and on facebook and i will read 3 of their works and will force my friends to read their work and will feature them on my page and will become their fan(last one is my wish)

2nd prize: Feature 2nd prize winner on my page, read 3 entries and become their fan

3rd prize: Read 3 entries and feature on my page

So, thats it...now...here is the suicide note

Dear Mom and Dad,
I know am hurting you, I know everybody have been warning about setting my priorities lately; I know if, only if I had listened to you, to my friends, to my counselor, I would have been happy. But, I was adamant, I was stubborn enough, I was my own owner. I wanted to live my life...and we all know...I have spoiled it...as any other youngster...I have. And am giving it a fair deal...I am ending my life...I deserve it...yes I do...I know you don’t deserve it...but I deserve nothing but this. I know mom you carried me for nine months you have a fair right on me...you have a right to decide what I should and what I shouldn't...and I do wish I get you as my mother in every birth...it's just that...it's so hard to imagine a whole life now that everything is over, now that he has finally pushed me out of his life...am sorry mom, I have spoiled the best gift a mother can ever give her child...my life...and I know you'll never forgive me...I know. Am sorry dad out of everything you gave me, that kiss you gave me when nurse bring me out of the labor room...that loving hug when I first walked and when I called you dada...that superman lift you used to give me when I was 3...that giving me the pleasure of horse-riding on your back...that calm with which you help me cope when I merely passed 1st class...that loving environment...that hugging me tight and teaching me principles of life, that I never seriously listened...that warning...everything...a thousand more things that I was unable to list...am sorry...I couldn't live through it. I couldn't live through this hell...I couldn't...I couldn't see his intentions...and now...not only me...but everyone...everyone I know is hurt. Who is responsible for it? Me...only me...worst person alive...worst person who is going to die...right now...I know I should live...I know I will gradually forget him...I know you'll forgive me...but that is what I don’t want...I want me to be punished...m a criminal...am a criminal...I don’t wane be forgiven...I want to die...
Good Bye...Mom...Good Bye...Dad...
Your Criminal Daughter,
Jinia

I forgot mentioning...
you don't necessarily need to fix my note it just fetch you an extra point
Oh! and yes whoever does something out of it with children's story as genre get an extra point too

The Submitted Entries with links:

1.HannahBrook9: Suicide note (Romance) - Jinisha's Challenge--->link---->http://www.booksie.com/true_confessions/short_story/hannahbrook9/suicide-note-(romance)-jinishas-challenge

Extended version to Jinisha's challenge----->link---->http://www.booksie.com/horror/short_story/hannahbrook9/extended-version-to-jinishas-challenge

2.lilias17: Suicide note challenge entry--->link--->http://www.booksie.com/romance/short_story/lilias17/suicide-note-challenge-entry

3.Silverings:Fake suicide note--->link---->http://www.booksie.com/other/miscellaneous/silverings/fake-suicide-note

4.Nuttynutx246:Worthless and Pointless (*jinsha's challenge*)----->link---->http://www.booksie.com/other/novel/nuttynatx246/worthless-and-pointless-(*jinshas-challenge*)

5.xnbdyknwsx:A spell of words---->link---->http://www.booksie.com/fantasy/novel/xnbdyknwsx/a-spell-of-words


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