My talisman...

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Is it a dream or...

What is that smell in the air,

It’s so seductive…

I looked around uneasily,

And there I see a light…

‘help me with my tedious life’,

‘Who are you, my talisman’?

He smiled at me, so benignant,

Angels around him, shoot flowers on me…


He kneeled down and caught my hand,

‘You missed me whole life’, he asked…

Tears dribbled on my face,

‘Where were you’, I yelled…

He kissed on my lips, angels closed their eyes,

We flew to the sky, clouds danced around…


No I don’t believe my eyes,

It’s a star and I am sitting on it…

‘how could you do this’, I wondered,

‘Trust me and close your eyes’, he whispered…


I am in the heat of the moment,

The sea bed is so picturesque…

Before I could say anything,

‘Trust me and close your eyes’, he whispered…


We swung on the rainbow, caught the rain drops,

Stood on the tallest mountain, kissed on the moon’s face…

We chased the birds, jumped with the waterfall,

Played with all faunas, slept on the flower petal…


‘You kissed on my soul, not my lips’, I swore,

He gave an amulet, ’kiss it and I will be there’…

‘No I can’t leave you now’, I implore,

‘Trust me and close your eyes’, he whispered…


Which is this place, seems my house,

Was that a dream, no I hope so…

Where is he,

 Left me forever? ,

But how this pendent on my neck,

Can I kiss on it???...

Submitted: July 27, 2012

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This is really beautiful! I like the line "Stood on the tallest mountain, kissed on the moon's face...."

Fri, July 27th, 2012 1:45pm


Thankyou so much...:):).

Sun, July 29th, 2012 9:57pm


immense imagery, beautiful description, emotional, these all elements make this poem dazzling. The flow of the words are smooth and enchanting. Your juggling with words make you a good poem. Nice work ! Keep it up !

You earn a huge like from me for this beautiful poem too. Please intimate me whenever you post another poem.

Mon, August 13th, 2012 4:17pm


Thankyou so much vikrant for reading all my poems and giving sincere comments...Thanks a lot...I will surely intimate you when i post another peom...

Mon, August 13th, 2012 9:59pm


Wow what a romantic piece of work, you took me to another world though wonderful imagery and lovely emotions. Good work, keep writting dear :)

Tue, October 2nd, 2012 3:34pm

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