I was also asked to write a Metaphor/Simile poem in my evil class so I wrote one on Hate. This isn't really my style of poetry, but I kind of like this one-Enjoy! (if u can!)


A passionate disliking of something

causing you to seek revenge.

Never knowing when you're going to snap.

Hate is a fist of rage

Submitted: January 15, 2008

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There is a - THIN - line between love & hate.

Wed, January 16th, 2008 12:18am


Very true, I've thought about that before but it really hit me now that you brought it to my attention- Thanks!

Thu, January 17th, 2008 10:26am

The Megathon

Very powerfully written! I like this a lot.

Mon, February 4th, 2008 3:35am


Thanks! I actually was forced to write this! lol

Mon, February 4th, 2008 12:03pm

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