You Deserve Better Than me and my pathetic un-rhyming poem

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If you have a really um, different relationship situation, this poem is for you. I wrote this when my Super guy and I were caught in a trap, and couldn't get out. I never knew what to say so this is how i'm telling you how I feel. I would really like some input and tips to help me improve! Thanks!

Submitted: September 14, 2007

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You Deserve Better Than Me and My Pathetic Un-Rhyming Poem

I don't deserve you super guy

But I can't imagine life with out you

A life lived unhappily might as well

have never been lived at all

you deserve so much better

But my selfish being can't let you go

I don't think I deserve you

And you don't think you deserve me

But maybe in the crazy reality of it all

we deserve each other.

I don't know what you see in me though

Besides my ugliness and fragile soul

I'm not pretty like the other girls

And no where near as skinny

And here you are perfect in my eyes

In every single way

You deserve better than me

Don't go for the less

go for the best

you deserve better than me super guy

but I think, well, what I'm trying to say, Is...

I think I love you,


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