Poem by: Argetlam
love, short, lonely
Submitted: December 16, 2011
I have felt love's sweet embrace,
I have felt rejection's cold face.
In these times I must keep apace,
Lest all joy soon be erased.
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I have read your profile, and this poem reflects those emotions, I don't have any criticism just keep smiling.,
Aww...thanks. I try to make my poetry sound like me, and I try to let my emotions fuel my work and let it flow out while also keeping a good rhyme scheme...Thank you.
Simple but effective, I like it!
Thank you...Your comment means a lot to me...I love your work. I've said before, though I don't know if you've seen the comments, that your poetry just speaks to my heart and embodies my emotions. :)
Short yet rife with emotion. I adore small poems that can bring the reader to feel and realize so many different emotions and ideas all in one instance. You should try your hand at haiku; I find real joy in writing them myself. A lovely write??
Could you tell me then how to write them? I'm not really certain how the rhythm is supposed to be...
Beautiful! I am kind of a novice but I get inspired to write more after reading material like this! Says so much with very little.
Oh, no...you are far from a novice. I've read some of your work, pure genius. :) I love poetry with this style to it. I usually can't write this style well; the words just don't come. So I get really proud of myself when I can. :) Thank you for your comment!
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