A BIT OF HEAVEN
A little bit of heaven,
a little bit of sound,
this is the way we,
turn the world around.
Twinkling starsup high in the sky,
giving us light like angles delight,
listen very closely to the angles sing,
bringing us such peace and so sereen.
Floating on laughter bounce up and down,
listen everyone we can turn the world around,
no more sadness only joy,
for every man,woman,girl and boy.
The sun shines every day,
bringing the warmth of the rays,
giving us peace in every way,
this we should shout everynight,everyday.
Submitted: July 27, 2013
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A very uplifting poem.I like it.
Dee.
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thank you Dee, I am glad that I may of helped you in some way.
Sat, September 7th, 2013 8:37am
Simply beautiful.
Thu, September 12th, 2013 7:47am
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thank you glad you found it something readable
Thu, September 12th, 2013 12:54am
love it :)
Thu, September 12th, 2013 5:18pm
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thank you glad you enjoyed it
Thu, September 12th, 2013 10:26am
I loooooove this too. Inspiring!!!!!
Wed, September 18th, 2013 12:54pm
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thank you glad you enjoyed it.
Wed, September 18th, 2013 12:04pm
Lovely poem :)
Tue, June 10th, 2014 8:37pm
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thank you laurajane
Wed, June 11th, 2014 6:53am
This was beautiful. with everything going on in the world right now, its a very powerful message
-Simone
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I thankyou for your reply to this even if it was 2014 when I wrote this it still means the same for the world to look for peace
Sun, October 23rd, 2016 3:30am
This poem really gives the reader a feeling of comfort and hope, well done.
Tue, October 25th, 2016 4:54pm
WOW What a poem loved it
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malakmanel15
Thank you so much sir for this beautiful poem I feel that you are a kind of happiness messenger.
Fri, August 30th, 2013 7:06pmAuthor
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hi I write these things to maybe help some people, I thank you for your comments, if I can help in any way for someone then I will put my heart in it.
Sat, August 31st, 2013 1:07am