a bit of heaven

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

happiness

A BIT OF HEAVEN

 

A little bit of heaven,

a little bit of sound,

this is the way we,

turn the world around.

 

Twinkling starsup high in the sky,

giving us light like angles delight,

listen very closely to the angles sing,

bringing us such peace and so sereen.

 

Floating on laughter bounce up and down,

listen everyone we can turn the world around,

no more sadness only joy,

for every man,woman,girl and boy.

 

The sun shines every day,

bringing the warmth of the rays,

giving us peace in every way,

this we should shout everynight,everyday.


Submitted: July 27, 2013

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malakmanel15

Thank you so much sir for this beautiful poem I feel that you are a kind of happiness messenger.

Fri, August 30th, 2013 7:06pm

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hi I write these things to maybe help some people, I thank you for your comments, if I can help in any way for someone then I will put my heart in it.

Sat, August 31st, 2013 1:07am

Desilu

A very uplifting poem.I like it.
Dee.

Sat, September 7th, 2013 3:32pm

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thank you Dee, I am glad that I may of helped you in some way.

Sat, September 7th, 2013 8:37am

simonette

Simply beautiful.

Thu, September 12th, 2013 7:47am

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thank you glad you found it something readable

Thu, September 12th, 2013 12:54am

BothSetsOfLips

love it :)

Thu, September 12th, 2013 5:18pm

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thank you glad you enjoyed it

Thu, September 12th, 2013 10:26am

simonette

I loooooove this too. Inspiring!!!!!

Wed, September 18th, 2013 12:54pm

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thank you glad you enjoyed it.

Wed, September 18th, 2013 12:04pm

laurajane824

Lovely poem :)

Tue, June 10th, 2014 8:37pm

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thank you laurajane

Wed, June 11th, 2014 6:53am

S.B.Scoular

This was beautiful. with everything going on in the world right now, its a very powerful message

-Simone

Sun, October 23rd, 2016 1:50am

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I thankyou for your reply to this even if it was 2014 when I wrote this it still means the same for the world to look for peace

Sun, October 23rd, 2016 3:30am

rosyrainylovestory

This poem really gives the reader a feeling of comfort and hope, well done.

Tue, October 25th, 2016 4:54pm

SLJONES

WOW What a poem loved it

Mon, January 9th, 2017 11:53pm

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