How I got away from him

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

One day I went out on the street and.......

It was a fine autumn day. The wind was blowing leaves everywhere. At that moment, I stepped out of my apartment complex. I was wearing a tight blue t-shirt, skinny blue jeans and a matching scarf around my neck. As I stepped on the street, the wind blew really hard. My shiny hair started blowing. Then my scarf flew away. I gasped and ran behind it. It landed in the middle of the road. When I bent down to pick it up, I saw feet in front of me. I raised my head to see him. I gulped. He looked happy to see. But I wasn't! I picked up my scarf and took a step back. He took a step towards me. I took another step back. He took another step towards me. Then, I turned my back on him and ran as fast as I could. As I ran, I turned my head and saw him following me. And he was gaining on me! I cried out and ran up the stairs of the apartment complex. He chased me upstairs. Finally, I reached home. I opened the door and scrambled inside. He came running after me. He was just about to come in when I slammed the door on his face and locked it. I heard him scratching my front door. I sighed and sat down on a sofa. And that's how I escaped my neighbour's dog!


Submitted: July 13, 2012

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Riss Ryker

Hahaha!! Oh that's too funny! You really had me going there!

Tue, July 24th, 2012 4:59am

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Haha. Thanks

Mon, July 23rd, 2012 11:22pm

Sammy Wang Yang

Wow, what a twist! This brought a smile to me. Very clever, indeed. I had to read it TWICE.

Tue, July 24th, 2012 8:31pm

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Hahaha. Thanks

Tue, July 24th, 2012 10:17pm

bryan jonan

very creative

Mon, July 30th, 2012 5:22pm

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Thanks so much!

Mon, July 30th, 2012 12:31pm

ZaneJayxxxxxx

Lol, niiice. c:

Thu, August 9th, 2012 12:10am

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Thanks :D

Thu, August 9th, 2012 12:24am

Awaneesh Shukla

that's a good one, the title suggested this was gonna be something emotional , but it wasn't and that does make it lovely. great work, keep at it :)

Fri, August 24th, 2012 9:26am

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Hahahaha. Thanks!

Fri, August 24th, 2012 11:19am

Mahrukh Ameen

cool.i couldn't help laughing after i read it.i thought its a break u story......u know....something of the sort.

Fri, August 31st, 2012 7:55pm

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I know! Thanks :D

Tue, September 4th, 2012 7:57am

Vibha

Ha Ha .Very funny and interesting idea.. I too had written some thing like this .. good ..

Mon, September 17th, 2012 6:11am

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Thanks! Show me yours too!

Wed, September 19th, 2012 9:45am

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You know, running just makes dogs want to chase you that much more.

Mon, October 8th, 2012 7:10am

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Tell me about it! I know!

Mon, October 8th, 2012 8:28am

PaigeNicole

Good Job. I thought it was a mean person but turned out to be a dog. Great how you were able to keep it hidden until the last sentence.

Fri, October 12th, 2012 1:24pm

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Yeah :D Thanks so much for reading!

Fri, October 12th, 2012 11:47pm

reenagupta

very funny @ suspense

lv reading it

Mon, April 22nd, 2013 6:20am

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Thanks so much! I am very glad you enjoyed it

Mon, April 22nd, 2013 1:19am

AbstractKash

ROLF xD that was totally hilarious!!!loved the twist in the end. great writing ^_^

Wed, June 12th, 2013 7:45pm

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Thanks so much. I'm glad you like it :D

Thu, June 13th, 2013 1:36am

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