Tu Dusman he sahi......(A Ghazal in Hindi)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A ghazal for my Asian readers.....

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Kash hammari fetrat main aur husla hota,

Hum phir say tujhay aazmatay aur dagga khatay.

Teeri her baat par yakeen hota aur hum muskuratay,

Mud laytey en palko ko, aur phir say thokar khatay.

Tu dusman he sahi, fitrat teeri baywafa he sayi,

Mohabbat tujhsay kerkay, kasay kese aur ko apnatay?

Aab na who umrer hai, na who pehley se himmat rahi,

Ek dil hai jissay, aaj bhi hum tujhhey hain chahatey.

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Submitted: September 16, 2012

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Shekhar Srivastava

Wow..A great poem for your enemies....I will like it!!

Sun, September 16th, 2012 12:53pm

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Thank you shekhar :)

Sun, September 16th, 2012 6:21am

Aadam

Salaam , I'm really sorry but I understand the language

Sun, September 16th, 2012 2:08pm

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Hello Adam! It's ok if on being Canadian citizen you don't understood my Urdu ghazal, I will try to re write it in English so that you can enjoy it's content, take care :)

Sun, September 16th, 2012 7:13am

Aadam

Shukran :).

Also I'm South African

Sun, September 16th, 2012 7:36pm

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O.... Nice to know about you :), booksie is really mini world !!

Sun, September 16th, 2012 12:53pm

Vikrant

Tujhe dost kahu ya dushman kahu,
tu dosti bhi kuch dushmani si nibhata hai.

Kehata hai ke chahata hai meri khusi tu,
fir kyo hardam mujhe tu rulata hai.

Deta hai mujhe jeene ki dua tu,
ya jeete jee marne ki saja deta hai.

Ye jankar bhi ke ye sanse hai meri,
tod deta hai meri palko pe saje khwabo ko tu,
aur wajah mujhe neend se jagna bata deta hai.(Borrowed)

This ghazal is very beautiful and relevent to this time and to this world. I ought to say that I always wait something new from your pen. Good work and a huge like from me for the lovely ghazal.

One suggestion please put this ghazal along with the rest of your featured writing.

Mon, September 17th, 2012 3:57am

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Hello Vikrant, I really liked this ghazal written under my poem, please give me details of it, like who is the poet and sang by whom, it is really going with my content, I would love to read that too !! Thanks for your huge like :))) Actually I didn't displayed it in my feathered writting because some of readers tries to read that and complains that they don't understand Hindi.... I wrote this in English front too for Bangladeshi and Pakistani readers who understands emotion and language but not Hindi front .... Anyways aap ki request sir ankho per ..... Thanks again !!

Sun, September 16th, 2012 9:14pm

Omer

acha isay hum indo pak k context say ziada ek generalized poem lay saktay hain.. of two enemies.. bht natural poem ha.. apki writing ki khoobsorti yeh ha k ap real life main lay jati ho... i enjoyed it.. thank you..

Mon, September 17th, 2012 3:03pm

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Omer ji, this is love poem, Indo-Pak wali yet to be published... So little 'saber' is badly needed... Is poem key leye THANKS meeray Dusman deserve kertey hain, keyu ? :))))

Mon, September 17th, 2012 12:09pm

AWESOME ASHMITA

wowwwwwwww

Wed, September 19th, 2012 9:13pm

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Thanks Ashmita :)

Wed, September 19th, 2012 2:27pm

Basilia

laajawab...is qadar kisi ke liye pyar aur aithbaar...bahut khoob likha :) i expect some more shayari from you :)

Mon, October 1st, 2012 3:10pm

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Bahoot bahoot shukreya ! Sure I would keep writing till my readers & dusman keep inspiring ;)

Mon, October 1st, 2012 9:45am

Vikrant

Hey sorry for the late reply, actually I choose these lines randomly. I really don't know if these lines were sung by any singer or singers. Thanks.

Tue, October 2nd, 2012 4:12am

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It's ok Vikrant.......now I have to search that, thanks :)

Tue, October 2nd, 2012 4:30am

meenakshi sharma

hmm.. its pretty good.. are you really from saudi arab . don't mind . because i think that you're an indian ..have a good day .. :) :)

Thu, October 4th, 2012 2:47pm

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You are right dear, I am an Indian but stays in Saudia Arabia, thanks for liking my poem !!!

Thu, October 4th, 2012 8:16am

King Roger

WOW! This is the first word that came to my mind when i finished reading this poem. I loved it.
Love is so powerful that if you know your betrayal is certain, you will still love..love your enemy too...
continue making people realize how about love :-)
Cheers!!
Rog

Sun, October 7th, 2012 4:38pm

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Thanks for such a heartfelt review on my simple poem, thanks a lot for everything King Roger , sure I will keep sharing all sentiments of love to touch my readers emotions...... Cheers to you too !!!!

Sun, October 7th, 2012 12:59pm

dynamic12

Outstanding, Standing Ovation to you.
I would like to replace the 2nd last line of the poem with:
"Humme woh himmat aur taaqat ho na ho, Hum har baar dagaa khanee ko hai taiyaar;
Bas aapke haato ka khanjar ho, aur hamaari phith ho yaar!"

Sat, December 8th, 2012 5:47am

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Zabardast !! It seems as a shayaar in you is awaken......
Thanks buddy for so much appreciation and standing ovation, I am really feeling honored.

Sat, December 8th, 2012 2:13am

dynamic12

Arey Shayar in me never slept..in fact I tried to kill it myself deliberately, but kambakht marta hi nahi, mai kya karu. It's a long story anyway.

Sat, December 8th, 2012 11:40am

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Once a person told me 'why you write in is a really waste of time, do something constructive' & I replied 'this writing bug is in my blood I have to cut my veins to drain that'. You made me recalled that !

Sat, December 8th, 2012 3:45am

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