Frozen Eternity

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Frozen Eternity

Status: Finished

Frozen Eternity

Poem by: Ashleigh Butcher

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Genre: Poetry

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Summary

you know that moment when you catch someones eye- and it feels like time stops in that moment? Well, my moment-stopper happens to give those glaces quite frequently... I hate to be cliche when writing anything that may have even the slightest romantic connotation- so therefore i hope this isn't. The verses are short- and hopefully everything is expressed in them. Getting to the point quickly is sort of my thing; the moment itself is short- and therefore i feel the description should not be long and waffling. I hope the poem, like the moments, are of large impact- despite their length.
Have love; find peace; give hope.
VIVA LA VIE BOHEME.

Summary

you know that moment when you catch someones eye- and it feels like time stops in that moment? Well, my moment-stopper happens to give those glaces quite frequently... I hate to be cliche when writing anything that may have even the slightest romantic connotation- so therefore i hope this isn't. The verses are short- and hopefully everything is expressed in them. Getting to the point quickly is sort of my thing; the moment itself is short- and therefore i feel the description should not be long and waffling. I hope the poem, like the moments, are of large impact- despite their length.
Have love; find peace; give hope.
VIVA LA VIE BOHEME.

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Submitted: June 18, 2008

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Submitted: June 18, 2008

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Quiet is the moment leased;

And paused the scene, as time has ceased

to move in it's existant pace;

And we (with able bodies graced)

are still, no motion in our show

upon the fabled path of time to go-

But rather, in your eyes I see

A moment in frozen eternity.


© Copyright 2016 Ashleigh Butcher. All rights reserved.

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