You're Gone
Poem by: Ashley I Read
I must declare, in the simplest of ways,
I will remember for the rest of my days
Your laugh, your scent, your face, your smile
For you I could, and would, run a mile.
I realise now that it was a mistake
To let you go and simply take
And not to give you all I could
And not to love you the way I should.
You bring out a smile on the darkest of days
Your smile was brighter than the sun’s rays,
Now you’re gone, you’re no longer around
I’m all alone and don’t hear the sound
Of both your laugh and your voice
But of course, your departure, wasn’t your choice
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You're Gone
Comments
Hey its a nice poem :) guess i'm d 1st to read :)
thats a great poem. I think it would be good to have it laid out differently as this format doesn't do it justice.meaningful poem though
Hey :) Sorry This has taken so long to reply.. but thanks for the feedback!
It was supposed to be in a different layout, but I'm fairly useless with computers.
woooww..that really is so surreal..i loved it..!!!...great job..!!..:)...
~Amani
Thanks :)
Great poem I feel I can relate to this poem somehow xxxx
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Thank you :) I think it can be related to by alot of people. Glad you liked it.
Really good. I liked your style of rhyming. IT seems like the last line means something to you. Because I feel like I'm missing something. But that is what makes it mysterious. Good job.
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Thank you :) the last line symbolises to me, about the loss of a loved one, but it can be mean different things to different people. :)
I’m so glad I read this poem. I simply loved it. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Why thankyou :) your opinion is much appreciated and valued
Absolutely beautiful. Heart felt and emotional you really do have a way with words :)
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